Jan. 12, 2022
Why art exists? Should it die?
I think the key to comprehending art's function is in the differences between a photo vs a drawing. A photo is taken from reality while a drawing is drawn from imagination. This is why a drawing is worth so much more because it takes effort and is more flexible. It's not about the reality but more your way of viewing the world that makes it significant. Art promotes individualism. Art doesn't exist for the sake of being art but for us to express ourselves and our world. Art shouldn't die or else someone will die because if everybody forgot that someone, that someone will die.
You probably can tell. This article makes no sense because it is just all my thought mashed into it. This philosophical thing doesn't suit me at all lmao.
Why does art exists? Should it die?cease to exist?
"Die" is a bit of a strong/morbid word and it is a bit unusual to use it in an informal setting like this.
I think the key to comprehending art's function is incomes from examining the differences between a photo vs a drawing.
A photo is taken from reality while a drawing is drawn fromcreated from one's imagination.
Sounds a bit better not to repeat words like 'drawing' and 'drawn'
This is why a drawing is worth so much more, because it takes effort and is more flexiblunique.
I think 'flexible' might not be the right word here. Perhaps unique (meaning each drawing tends to be different from another)?
Art shouldn't die or else someone will die because if everybodycease to exist. If we all forgot thaabout someone, that someone willould die.
Not too sure what you mean here by 'or else someone will die'. Is it about the fact that, through art, your ideas can live forever?
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This was a tricky prompt and I think you tackled it well! It's hard to express philosophical ideas in a foreign language.
Jan. 13, 2022
Thank you so much, your encouragement is just what I needed :))
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Why art exists? Should it die? Why does art exist "Die" is a bit of a strong/morbid word and it is a bit unusual to use it in an informal setting like this.
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I think the key to comprehending art's function is in the differences between a photo vs a drawing. I think the key to comprehending art's function |
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A photo is taken from reality while a drawing is drawn from imagination. A photo is taken from reality while a drawing is Sounds a bit better not to repeat words like 'drawing' and 'drawn'
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This is why a drawing is worth so much more because it takes effort and is more flexible. This is why a drawing is worth so much more, because it takes effort and is more I think 'flexible' might not be the right word here. Perhaps unique (meaning each drawing tends to be different from another)?
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It's not about the reality but more your way of viewing the world that makes it significant. |
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Art promotes individualism. |
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Art doesn't exist for the sake of being art but for us to express ourselves and our world. |
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Art shouldn't die or else someone will die because if everybody forgot that someone, that someone will die. Art shouldn't Not too sure what you mean here by 'or else someone will die'. Is it about the fact that, through art, your ideas can live forever?
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You probably can tell. You probably can tell |
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This article makes no sense because it is just all my thought mashed into it.
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This philosophical thing doesn't suit me at all lmao.
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