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haveagoodtime

April 1, 2022

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What would you convince to take public transportation?

Before I start, please feel free to correct my sentences in terms of stylistic :) .

This entry will cover up my and mine friends experience’s about public transportation in Germany.

I am using public transport often, for example when I go to colleague or go shopping. I feel more comfortable when I don’t have to drive, because for me driving is an activity which needs a lot of attention, especially in the city.
This is the main reason why I am taking 40 minutes more time into account, compared to driving, when I go to school.

The time is a big disadvantage, even though it can be used in public transit for learning, surfing or in short, to relax. This was a factor for my former boss and my workmate to not take the bus. My boss would need 1h30 for a 20 min car ride. Another minus is the ticket cost, which decreased drastically after the subventions from the state. In addition, the fuel prices hindered people to take the car.

What is your opinion on this? And in terms of my English skills, please feel free to make suggestions aswell, maybe in terms of grammar.

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What would you convince you to take public transportation?

Before I start, please feel free to correct my sentences in terms of stylistice. :) .

This entry will cover up my and miney friends experiences aboutwith public transportation in Germany.

"cover up" == "verbergen"

I am usingoften use public transport often, for example when I go to colleaguge or go shopping.

I assume you're not visiting a "Kollege"?

I feel more comfortable when I don’t have to drive, because for me driving is an activity whichthat needs a lot of attention, especially in the city.

This is the main reason why I am takingdd 40 minutes more time into account, compared to driving, when I go to school.

The time taken is a big disadvantage, even though it can be used in public transit for learning, surfing or in short, to relax, in public transport.

This was a factorreason for my former boss and my workmate to not take the bus.

My boss would need 1h30 forIt would take my boss 1 h 30 instead of a 20 min car ride.

Another minusdisadvantage is the ticketravel cost, which deincreased drastically after the subventions from the stategovernment subsidies ended.

In addition, the fuel prices hinderdiscouraged people to takefrom using the car.

What is your opinion on this?

And in terms of my English skills, please feel free to make suggestions as well, maybe in terms of grammar.

One important hint: in English definite articles are far less common than in German.

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haveagoodtime

April 2, 2022

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Thank you very much :)

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diggn

April 2, 2022

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Thank you very much :)

No worries! Any questions, feel free to ask!

What would you convince to take public transportation?

What would you convince you to take public transportation?

Before I start, please feel free to correct my sentences in terms of stylistic :) .

Before I start, please feel free to correct my sentences in terms of stylistice. :) .

This entry will cover up my and mine friends experience’s about public transportation in Germany.

This entry will cover up my and miney friends experiences aboutwith public transportation in Germany.

I am using public transport often, for example when I go to colleague or go shopping.

I am usingoften use public transport often, for example when I go to colleaguge or go shopping.

I feel more comfortable when I don’t have to drive, because for me driving is an activity which needs a lot of attention, especially in the city.

I feel more comfortable when I don’t have to drive, because for me driving is an activity whichthat needs a lot of attention, especially in the city.

This is the main reason why I am taking 40 minutes more time into account, compared to driving, when I go to school.

This is the main reason why I am takingdd 40 minutes more time into account, compared to driving, when I go to school.

The time is a big disadvantage, even though it can be used in public transit for learning, surfing or in short, to relax.

The time taken is a big disadvantage, even though it can be used in public transit for learning, surfing or in short, to relax, in public transport.

This was a factor for my former boss and my workmate to not take the bus.

This was a factorreason for my former boss and my workmate to not take the bus.

My boss would need 1h30 for a 20 min car ride.

My boss would need 1h30 forIt would take my boss 1 h 30 instead of a 20 min car ride.

Another minus is the ticket cost, which decreased drastically after the subventions from the state.

Another minusdisadvantage is the ticketravel cost, which deincreased drastically after the subventions from the stategovernment subsidies ended.

In addition, the fuel prices hindered people to take the car.

In addition, the fuel prices hinderdiscouraged people to takefrom using the car.

What is your opinion on this?

And in terms of my English skills, please feel free to make suggestions aswell, maybe in terms of grammar.

And in terms of my English skills, please feel free to make suggestions as well, maybe in terms of grammar.

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