What if the future was bad.

If you could time travel, would you go into the past or the future?

"If you could time travel, would you go into the past or the future?"
In conclusion, I'd not go either to the past or the future.
At first, I imagined if I could get to go into the past and pass some better advice to myself in that time. But it's not sure to make my life, that of me in the present, better.
On the other hand, about the future, I'm scared. I can't bring myself to face the truth in that future.
For those reasons, I think I would stay in the present. It sounds a boring answer, that I know, though.

30days day05

"もし、未来が悪いものだったら。"

「もしタイムトラベルできるとしたら、過去と未来のどちらに行きますか？」

結論から言うと、私は過去にも未来にも行かないと思います。
一度は、もし過去に行ったら、その頃の自分に向かってより良いアドバイスができるのではないかと想像したりしました。でも、それが私の人生（現在の私の人生）をより良くしてくれるかは確かではありません。
一方で、未来については怖いです。その未来にある真実に直面する気になれないのです。
そういった理由から、私は現在にとどまると思います。つまらない答えでしょうから、申し訳ないのですけれども。

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What if the fFuture was bad.?

"If you could time travel, would you go into the past or the future?

I~~n conclusion, I'd not~~ don't think I'd want to go to either to the past or the future.

"In conclusion" is used to signify your final point or summary. It doesn't make sense to use it at the start of your post.

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At first, I imagined ~~if I could get to go into the past and pass some better advice to myself in that time~~traveling into the past and giving some advice to my younger self.

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But ~~it's not sure~~that wouldn't be certain to make my life, ~~that of me~~ in the present, any better.

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On the other hand, I'm scared about the future~~, I'm scared~~.

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I can't bring myself to face the truth ~~in that future~~of what the future will hold.

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For those reasons, I think I would choose to stay in the present.

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I~~t sound~~ know that that's a boring answer~~, that I know,~~ though.

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I agree with you. Visiting the past or future could both have terrifying consequences.

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June 13, 2021, 2:58 p.m.

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