April 2, 2021
What I like to do
My hobbies are basic but I love them. Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline. But I don't. What do I like to do?
- Reading books
- Writing (in Spanish)
- Watching Netflix
- doing some exercise
- playing videogames
I'm kind of average but I'm happy. Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them.
My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I also like reading all kinds of books. Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres. The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames and the last book I've read it is "Star Wars Lost Stars" by Claudia Gray (also cool). I would recommend both of them to you.
What I like to do
My hobbies are basic but I love them.
Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline.
But I don't.
What do I like to do?
- Reading books
- Writing (in Spanish)
- Watching Netflix
- doing some exercise
- playing videogames
I'm kind of average but I'm happy.
Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them.
Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres.
I would recommend both of them to you.
I recommend them both.
Feedback
What I corrected wasn't technically incorrect or unnatural but I think it would be better to say "I recommend them both." in this context.
April 3, 2021
Thanks! I appreciate the feedback:)
What I like to do
My hobbies are basic but I love them.
Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline.
But I don't.
- Reading books
Your version is not incorrect, but it does not match up with the previous sentence "What do I like to do?" If you change that to "What do I like?" then "Reading books" reads correctly.
- Writinge (in Spanish)
Same comments here.
- Watching Netflix
Same comments here.
- doing some eExercise
"Exercise" is both a noun and a verb, so you can use it as a verb in place of "doing some"
- playing videogames
Same comments in terms of agreement with the lead-in sentence.
I'm kind of average but I'm happy.
Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them.
My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I also like reading all kinds of books.
Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres.
The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames, and the last book I've read it is "Star Wars Lost Stars" by Claudia Gray (also cool).
I would recommend both of them to you.
Feedback
Overall this is a great job! There are only a few minor errors.
April 3, 2021
Thank you! I really appreciate it:)
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- Watching Netflix - Watch Same comments here.
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- doing some exercise - "Exercise" is both a noun and a verb, so you can use it as a verb in place of "doing some"
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- playing videogames - play Same comments in terms of agreement with the lead-in sentence.
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What I like to do |
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My hobbies are basic but I love them. |
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Some people could write about their passion for climbing mountains, riding motorbikes, or any activities involving adrenaline. |
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But I don't. |
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What do I like to do? |
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- Reading books - Read Your version is not incorrect, but it does not match up with the previous sentence "What do I like to do?" If you change that to "What do I like?" then "Reading books" reads correctly.
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- Writing (in Spanish) - Writ Same comments here.
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I'm kind of average but I'm happy. |
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Besides, my not-so-exciting hobbies are easy to practice even in pandemic times, so I've not stopped enjoying them. |
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My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I also like reading all kinds of books. My favorite book is The Lord of the Rings, but I |
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Although I usually have a better time reading fantasy than other genres. |
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The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames and the last book I've read it is "Star Wars Lost Stars" by Claudia Gray (also cool). The last book I really enjoyed was "Kings of the Wyld" by Nicholas Eames, and the last book I've read |
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I would recommend both of them to you. I would recommend both of them to you. I recommend them both.
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