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June 10, 2022

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What I like about writing

At firts, I was going to talk about my love for videogames, but I've told the story so many times. Also, I think a lot of people who are into this hobby had a similar experience with their first console: The exciting moment when your parents bougth you the console of yours dreams.

Instead I'm going to talk about writing, a hobby I recently got into, and that has rapidly becamed one of my favorites.

I always had an interest for this kind of mystical worlds that appear on videogames and fantasy shows, to the point of wanting to make one myself. The fact that I could imagine something unique, and translate those thougths into a page, where I could see how it came to life; That feeling was beutiful when I sat down to write for the first time, and it still has that magic, the capacity to transport me to somewhere else.

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What I lLike aAbout wWriting

At firtst, I was going to talk about my love for video games, but I've told the story so many times.

Also, I think a lot of people who are into this hobby had a similar experience with their first console: The exciting moment when your parents bougth you the console of yours dreams.

Instead I'm going to talk about writing, a hobby I recently got into, and that has rapidly becaomed one of my favorites.

I always had an interest for this kind of mystical worlds that appear oin video games and fantasy shows, to the point of wanting to make one myself.

The fact that I could imagine something unique, and translate those thougthts ionto a page, where I could see how it came to life; Tthat feeling was beutiful when I sat down to write for the first time was beautiful, and it still has that magic, the capacity to transport me to somewhere else.

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What I like about writing

What I lLike aAbout wWriting

At firts, I was going to talk about my love for videogames, but I've told the story so many times.

At firtst, I was going to talk about my love for video games, but I've told the story so many times.

Also, I think a lot of people who are into this hobby had a similar experience with their first console: The exciting moment when your parents bougth you the console of yours dreams.

Instead I'm going to talk about writing, a hobby I recently got into, and that has rapidly becamed one of my favorites.

Instead I'm going to talk about writing, a hobby I recently got into, and that has rapidly becaomed one of my favorites.

I always had an interest for this kind of mystical worlds that appear on videogames and fantasy shows, to the point of wanting to make one myself.

I always had an interest for this kind of mystical worlds that appear oin video games and fantasy shows, to the point of wanting to make one myself.

The fact that I could imagine something unique, and translate those thougths into a page, where I could see how it came to life; That feeling was beutiful when I sat down to write for the first time, and it still has that magic, the capacity to transport me to somewhere else.

The fact that I could imagine something unique, and translate those thougthts ionto a page, where I could see how it came to life; Tthat feeling was beutiful when I sat down to write for the first time was beautiful, and it still has that magic, the capacity to transport me to somewhere else.

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