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June 20, 2021

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Two Small ‘Do-Nabe’ Earthen Pots

"What is your favorite thing you own?"

I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot). Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay. I bought it to cook boiled rice.
I screwed up. I've blackened the bottom of the pot. So, I have two pots(They are the same shape).
Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it. (I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)


『あなたが持っている物の中で、大好きな物は何ですか?』
今回は、小さな土鍋について書きます。土鍋とは、土から作られた鍋です。ご飯を炊くために買いました。
昔に失敗して、鍋の底を焦がしてしまいました。だから、今は2つ持っています(同じ形のものです)。
今では、ご飯を炊くことに慣れました。(鍋を火にかけるとき、タイマーをかけていますけれど。)

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I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot).

Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.

"is" relates to a singular object. Just saying "donabe" would work.

I screwed up.

I've blackenedurnt the bottom of the pot.

I hope I've interpreted your intentions correctly, because I'm assuming it got burnt?

So, I have two pots(They are with the same shape).

"So" isn't needed at the beginning.

Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it now.

(I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)

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Great job :)

Two Small ‘Do-Nabe’ Earthen Pots

"What is your favorite thing you own?

"

I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot).

Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.

Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.

I bought it to cook boiled rice.

I screwed up.

I've blackened the bottom of the pot.

I've blackenedurnt the bottom of the pot.

So, I have two pots(They are the same shape).

So, I have two pots(They are with the same shape).

Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it.

Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it now.

(I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)

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