June 20, 2021
"What is your favorite thing you own?"
I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot). Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay. I bought it to cook boiled rice.
I screwed up. I've blackened the bottom of the pot. So, I have two pots(They are the same shape).
Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it. (I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)
『あなたが持っている物の中で、大好きな物は何ですか?』
今回は、小さな土鍋について書きます。土鍋とは、土から作られた鍋です。ご飯を炊くために買いました。
昔に失敗して、鍋の底を焦がしてしまいました。だから、今は2つ持っています(同じ形のものです)。
今では、ご飯を炊くことに慣れました。(鍋を火にかけるとき、タイマーをかけていますけれど。)
I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot).
Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay.
"is" relates to a singular object. Just saying "donabe" would work.
I screwed up.
I've blackenedurnt the bottom of the pot.
I hope I've interpreted your intentions correctly, because I'm assuming it got burnt?
So, I have two pots(They are with the same shape).
"So" isn't needed at the beginning.
Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it now.
(I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.)
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Two Small ‘Do-Nabe’ Earthen Pots |
"What is your favorite thing you own? |
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I'll write about a small "土鍋"[Do•nabe](earthen pot). |
Donabe(s) is a pot made of clay. Donabe "is" relates to a singular object. Just saying "donabe" would work.
|
I bought it to cook boiled rice. |
I screwed up. |
I've blackened the bottom of the pot. I've b I hope I've interpreted your intentions correctly, because I'm assuming it got burnt?
|
So, I have two pots(They are the same shape).
"So" isn't needed at the beginning.
|
Now, I'm used to cooking rice with it.
|
(I set a timer when I put the pot on the fire, though.) |
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