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Ducky

March 22, 2022

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Traveling

When I was young sometimes I traveled alone. It is fine if you like to meet people, and it can be very fun. I remember that the adventure it could be in each corner, and each travel was different. Also can be some boring if you do not find more people, it all depend.
In the later years, I have always traveled with my girlfriend (now my wife). And yes, is very diferent. If I must to choose, I prefer traveling with people.

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Traveling

When I was young, I sometimes I traveled alone.

Another way to phrase this is “when I was young, I often traveled alone.”

It is fine if you like to meet people, and it can be very fun.

A comma doesn’t need to be placed before “and”.

I remember that the adventure it cwould be different in each corner, and each travel was different.

I don’t know what you mean by “in each corner”. I’m assuming you mean “in each place”.

Also can be somSome trips are boring if you do nocan’t find more people, it all depends.

In the later yearsBack then, I have always traveled with my girlfriend (now my wife).

And yes, it’s very different.

Make sure to add an extra “f” in “different”.

If I must to choose, I prefer traveling with people.

You can also say “If I had to choose…”

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Traveling

When I was young sometimes I traveled alone.

When I was young, I sometimes I traveled alone.

It is fine if you like to meet people, and it can be very fun.

It is fine if you like to meet people, and it can be very fun.

I remember that the adventure it could be in each corner, and each travel was different.

I remember that the adventure it cwould be different in each corner, and each travel was different.

Also can be some boring if you do not find more people, it all depend.

Also can be somSome trips are boring if you do nocan’t find more people, it all depends.

In the later years, I have always traveled with my girlfriend (now my wife).

In the later yearsBack then, I have always traveled with my girlfriend (now my wife).

And yes, is very diferent.

And yes, it’s very different.

If I must to choose, I prefer traveling with people.

If I must to choose, I prefer traveling with people.

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