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SummerTeaWater

April 23, 2022

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Traveling With My Parents

Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.

About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.

When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.

We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.

I hope all of my family members get good memories here.

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Traveling With My Parents

Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang, whereich is a nice place in Korea.

AWe visited here about 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.

When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.

We had tasty foods, and we visited nice tourist attractions.

I hope all of my family members getmake good memories here.

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That sounds like a nice trip! Great job! :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 27, 2022

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Thank you so much!

Traveling With My Parents

Today, my family and my parentsI travelled to Danyang whereich is a nice place in Korea.

About 20 years ago, we visited here and, so I hadve a lot of good memories of the area.

When I came went there again, I could find places where I had visited beforerediscovered places.

Or you could say "I found places that I had visited before"

We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.

I hope all of my family members getmade some good memories there.

We usually say "make memories"

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Good writing, I hope you had a good day! :)

Traveling With My Parents

Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang where is a nice place in Korea.

Today, my family and my parentsI travelled to Danyang whereich is a nice place in Korea.

Today, my family and my parents traveled to Danyang, whereich is a nice place in Korea.

About 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.

About 20 years ago, we visited here and, so I hadve a lot of good memories of the area.

AWe visited here about 20 years ago, we visited here and I had a lot of good memories.

When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.

When I came went there again, I could find places where I had visited beforerediscovered places.

When I came here again, I could find places where I had visited before.

We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.

We had tasty foods and we visited nice tourist attractions.

We had tasty foods, and we visited nice tourist attractions.

I hope all of my family members get good memories here.

I hope all of my family members getmade some good memories there.

I hope all of my family members getmake good memories here.

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