April 9, 2022
Traveling
My family comes to a hotel which I visited three years ago.
This hotel has a good swimming pool, so my kids really liked to visit here.
Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel any where for 3 years.
However, our government changes the rule of the social distance, now there is no big huddles for traveling.
We are enjoying beautiful scenes and tasty food.
I hope my kids have a nice memory this weekend.
Traveling
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Good writing and enjoy your holiday :)
April 10, 2022
Thank you very much. And "you are not allowed to go on holiday in big groups" is right. :)
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April 10, 2022
Thank you!
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My family comes to a hotel which I visited three years ago. My family My family Changing "I visited" to "I went to" makes it sounds more natural as it is not repeated
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This hotel has a good swimming pool, so my kids really liked to visit here. This hotel ha |
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Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel any where for 3 years. Because of COVID-19, we couldn’t travel any |
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However, our government changes the rule of the social distance, now there is no big huddles for traveling. However, our government Do you mean that you are not allowed to go on holiday in big groups?
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We are enjoying beautiful scenes and tasty food. |
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I hope my kids have a nice memory this weekend. I hope my kids have |
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