March 11, 2021
Train delay
I go to work by train. Usual train was not coming on time this morning. It seems due to the suicide incidents. I care about people who struggle with each problem alone.
私は毎日電車で通勤している。今朝はいつもは時間通りに来る電車が遅れて来た。自殺者が出た影響のようだ。私は一人で問題を抱えて悩んでいる人のことが心配だ。
Train dDelay
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I go to work each day by train.
Each day, every day = 毎日
UsualIn the mornings, it's unusual for the train wasto not comingarrive on time this morning.
It's = it is
It seems due to the suicide incidents.
I care'm worried about people who are struggleing with eachtheir problems alone.
「I'm worried about people who are going through depression alone」のほうがいいと思う
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March 12, 2021
UsualIn the mornings, it's unusual for the train wasto not comingarrive on time this morning.
It's = it is
It’s usual for the train to come on time. But today, the train delayed.
March 12, 2021
How is it ? Is it all right ?
March 12, 2021
It's usual for the train to arrive/come on time. ⭕
It's usual for the train to arrive on time, but it was delayed/late today. ⭕
And I seemed to have misread your original sentence. Let me edit the correction~
March 12, 2021
Updated it. Please let me know if you have any questions.
Also please correct journals written in Japanese. This community relies on giving and receiving corrections. ^^
March 12, 2021
Thank you for correcting. And I corrected my journal in Japanese.
March 12, 2021
Thank you for correcting. And I corrected my journal in Japanese.
Sounds good. Please also correct Japanese journals written by other users. ^^
March 12, 2021
Thank you so much. Yes, I would try correcting 😃
March 12, 2021
Thank you so much. Yes, I would try correcting
March 14, 2021
Happy to hear that :D
Yes, I will try correcting (some journals)*
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Train delay Train We use title case format for titles
https://ameblo.jp/aunlanguage/entry-11582360000.html |
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I go to work by train. I go to work each day by train. Each day, every day = 毎日
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Usual train was not coming on time this morning.
It's = it is
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It seems due to the suicide incidents. |
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I care about people who struggle with each problem alone. I 「I'm worried about people who are going through depression alone」のほうがいいと思う
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