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ismysecond

Dec. 1, 2020

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This morning...

This morning, I was in a supermarket, because I needed to buy milk.

I usually buy milk every week, and normally I bought it on Tuesdays. So I was at ten o´ clock because people after this time in the morning go to supermarket . When I come only a few people were buying. When I came out several people were there.

Although I bought only a day at week , this week I don´t buy meat, but the bakery was with the cakes in offer ,so I bought some cakes.

I paid with my credit card and when I was in the street I saw my friend Carlos. We were talking about the big problem of this year: The pandemic.

Ten minutes after, we said bye and I came home.

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This morning...

This morning, I was in a supermarket, because I needed to buy milk.

I usually buy milk every week, and normally I boughtuy it on Tuesdays.

To describe something that is generally true and continues to be true in the present, use present tense (hence, buy instead of bought).

So I it was at ten o´ 'clock , because people usually go to the supermarket after this time in the morning go to supermarket .

When I coame , only a few people were buyshopping.

When I came out , several people were there.

Although I bought only aI only go shopping one day at week , this week I don´t idn't buy meat, but the bakery was with thehad cakes ion offer ,sale, so I bought some cakes.

I paid with my credit card, and when I was in the street , I saw my friend Carlos.

We were talking about theis year's big problem of this year: T: the pandemic.

Ten minutes lafter, we said bye and I came home.

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ismysecond

Dec. 2, 2020

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This morning...

This morning, I was in a supermarket, because I needed to buy milk.

I usually buy milk every week, and normally I bought it on Tuesdays.

I usually buy milk every week, and normally I boughtuy it on Tuesdays.

So I was at ten o´ clock because people after this time in the morning go to supermarket .

So I it was at ten o´ 'clock , because people usually go to the supermarket after this time in the morning go to supermarket .

When I come only a few people were buying.

When I coame , only a few people were buyshopping.

When I came out several people were there.

When I came out , several people were there.

Although I bought only a day at week , this week I don´t buy meat, but the bakery was with the cakes in offer ,so I bought some cakes.

Although I bought only aI only go shopping one day at week , this week I don´t idn't buy meat, but the bakery was with thehad cakes ion offer ,sale, so I bought some cakes.

I paid with my credit card and when I was in the street I saw my friend Carlos.

I paid with my credit card, and when I was in the street , I saw my friend Carlos.

We were talking about the big problem of this year: The pandemic.

We were talking about theis year's big problem of this year: T: the pandemic.

Ten minutes after, we said bye and I came home.

Ten minutes lafter, we said bye and I came home.

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