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Scarlett_farther

June 6, 2023

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Thinking of laser Weeding

I watched a short video introducing laser weeding as being used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers do not buy herbicides again. This is a cutting-edge, new and innovative phsiciall technique that is harmless to soil and crops.

I hope this device can be developed or improved to kill flying mosquitoes one day. I am dreaming one day in near future: first, I turn on the laser mosquito control killing all the disgusting insects. After that, I would go to bed without any mosquito net in the summer. That's a wonderful thing for me.

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Thinking of lLaser Weeding

I watched a short video introducing laser weeding as beinga technique used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers do not buy herbicides again.

よかった!

また、
I watched a short video which introduced laser weeding as a technique used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers not buy herbicides again.

This is a cutting-edge, new and innovative physicialal technique that is harmless to soil and crops.

「cutting-edge」と「new」という言葉は同じ意味なので、一つだけがいいです。

I hope this device can be developed or improved upon to kill flying mosquitoes one day.

蚊が飛ぶことができるから、「flying」という言葉は必要ありません。

I am dreaming for one day in the near future: first, I turn on but I want to use the laser mosquito control first to killing all the disgusting insects.

After that, I wcould go to bed without (using) any mosquito net in the summer.

That's a wonderful thing for me.

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そうですね。面白い話です。教えてくれてありがとうございました!そういうことが発達するといいですね。そして、今回も上手に書けています!

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Scarlett_farther

June 25, 2023

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蚊が嫌いです、修正してくれてありがとございます!:ー)

Thinking ofabout laser Wweeding

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I watched a short video introducing laser weeding as being used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers do notthanks to which farmers don't have to buy herbicides again.

This is a cutting-edge, new and innovative physicialal technique that is harmless to soil and crops.

I am dream of it coming/happening one day in the near future: first, I'll turn on the laser mosquito control to killing all (of) the disgusting insects.

While the dream talks about something in the future, the action of dreaming is happening right now, so we generally use present. Another way to write the second sentence could be:
first, I turn on the laser mosquito control, killing all of the disgusting insects. (added a comma)

After that, I would be able to go to bed without any mosquito net in the summer.

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Very nice! I wish I had something like that home! I met a swarm of mosquitoes in the forest once :(

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Scarlett_farther

June 6, 2023

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Thank you so much for explaining!

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galaxy412

June 7, 2023

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no problem :)

Thinking of laser Weeding

Thinking ofabout laser Wweeding

Thinking of lLaser Weeding

I watched a short video introducing laser weeding as being used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers do not buy herbicides again.

I watched a short video introducing laser weeding as being used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers do notthanks to which farmers don't have to buy herbicides again.

I watched a short video introducing laser weeding as beinga technique used to kill weeds and unwanted vegetation on farms, which makes farmers do not buy herbicides again.

This is a cutting-edge, new and innovative phsiciall technique that is harmless to soil and crops.

This is a cutting-edge, new and innovative physicialal technique that is harmless to soil and crops.

This is a cutting-edge, new and innovative physicialal technique that is harmless to soil and crops.

I hope this device can be developed or improved to kill flying mosquitoes one day.

I hope this device can be developed or improved upon to kill flying mosquitoes one day.

I am dreaming one day in near future: first, I turn on the laser mosquito control killing all the disgusting insects.

I am dream of it coming/happening one day in the near future: first, I'll turn on the laser mosquito control to killing all (of) the disgusting insects.

I am dreaming for one day in the near future: first, I turn on but I want to use the laser mosquito control first to killing all the disgusting insects.

After that, I would go to bed without any mosquito net in the summer.

After that, I would be able to go to bed without any mosquito net in the summer.

After that, I wcould go to bed without (using) any mosquito net in the summer.

That's a wonderful thing for me.

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