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saoriiii

June 7, 2022

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The rainy season.

The rainy season has come, It has been raining for a long time.
Temperature is not high yet, so it's not hot and humid.
I don't like the air conditioner's wind against my body.
But I am afraid of heat stroke, turn on air conditioner.


梅雨になり、雨の日が続いています。
気温はまだ高くないので、蒸し暑くはないです。
私はエアコンの風が体に当たるのが苦手です。
もう少し暑くなると熱中症が怖いので、つけることになります。

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The rainy season.

The rainy season has come,. It has been raining for a long time.

The temperature is not high yet, so it's not hot and humid.

I don't like the air from the air conditioner's blowindg against my body.

"The air conditioner's wind" doesn't sound natural in English.

But I am afraid of heat stroke, so I turn on the air conditioner.

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I hope these corrections can help you improve, but I do feel like what you wrote would definitely be understood by English speakers. :)

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saoriiii

June 7, 2022

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Thank you for your reply.
I keep to study English!

The rainy season has come. Today, Iit has been raining for a long time.

Temperature is not high yet, so it's not hot andor humid.

I don't like the air conditioner's windbreeze against my body.

'Wind' specifically refers to a natural occurrence outdoors. 'Breeze' is more general, so it can be used to refer to air from an air conditioner.

But I am afraid of heat stroke, so I'll turn on the air conditioner.

The rainy season.

The rainy season has come, It has been raining for a long time.

The rainy season has come,. It has been raining for a long time.

The rainy season has come. Today, Iit has been raining for a long time.

Temperature is not high yet, so it's not hot and humid.

The temperature is not high yet, so it's not hot and humid.

Temperature is not high yet, so it's not hot andor humid.

I don't like the air conditioner's wind against my body.

I don't like the air from the air conditioner's blowindg against my body.

I don't like the air conditioner's windbreeze against my body.

But I am afraid of heat stroke, turn on air conditioner.

But I am afraid of heat stroke, so I turn on the air conditioner.

But I am afraid of heat stroke, so I'll turn on the air conditioner.

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