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April 1, 2021

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The New Year

In Japan, both the new school and business year are started in April. It's often said that people start their new chapter in their life around this season. Students move on to the next grade, and some people join a company or change residence. Because, during the end of March and the beginning of April, cherry blossoms reach full bloom, cherry blossoms associate with hope for new lives.

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The New Year

In Japan, both the new school and business year new yeare started in April.

It's often said that people start theira new chapter in their life around this season.

It just feels a little more natural this way.

Students move on to the next grade, and some people join a company or change residence.

It's correct, but consider "move house" instead of "change residence" to sound a little more natural/casual.

Because, during the end of March and the beginning of April, cherry blossoms reach full bloom, cherry blossoms are associated with hope for new livesfe.

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April 2, 2021

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The New Year

In Japan, both the new school and business year are started in April.

In Japan, both the new school and business year new yeare started in April.

It's often said that people start their new chapter in their life around this season.

It's often said that people start theira new chapter in their life around this season.

Students move on to the next grade, and some people join a company or change residence.

Students move on to the next grade, and some people join a company or change residence.

Because, during the end of March and the beginning of April, cherry blossoms reach full bloom, cherry blossoms associate with hope for new lives.

Because, during the end of March and the beginning of April, cherry blossoms reach full bloom, cherry blossoms are associated with hope for new livesfe.

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