May 19, 2021
"The Grave Mayhem" Grave Digging Tournament in Novosibirsk
The crematory in "Kamenka" park in Novosibirsk held a grave digging tournament called "The Grave Mayhem". The footage was published by the spectators.
As stated in the rules, the competitors must have dug a grave of sizes 200 centimeters in length, 80 in width and 160 centimeters in-depth as fast as they could. Any actual worker of the funeral service from any region of Russia and Commonwealth of Independent States above the age of 18 was allowed to participate in the competition.
According to the event managers, "The Grave Mayhem" should rise the funeral work execution's level and draw the attention of the youth to the funeral service worker profession.
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"The Grave Mayhem" Grave Digging Tournament in Novosibirsk
The crematory in "Kamenka" park in Novosibirsk held a grave digging tournament called "The Grave Mayhem".
You don’t have to put names of places in quotation marks, just capitalize them.
The footage was published by the spectators.
As stated in the rules, the competitors must havehad to duig a grave of sizes 200 centimeters in length, 80 in width and 160 centimeters in- depth as fast as they could.
It sounds more natural to take out “in size”, because it seems a bit unnecessary. “Must have dug” kind of gives the feeling that we’re guessing what the competitors did, so it sounds more natural not to use it, since we actually know the way they dug the graves (if that makes sense).
Any actual worker of the funeral service from any region of Russia and Commonwealth of Independent States above the age of 18 was allowed to participate in the competition.
It’s okay to leave out “actual”.
According to the event managers, "The Grave Mayhem" should raise the funeral work execution's level and draw the attention of the youth to the funeral service worker profession.
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"The Grave Mayhem" Grave Digging Tournament in Novosibirsk |
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The crematory in "Kamenka" park in Novosibirsk held a grave digging tournament called "The Grave Mayhem". The crematory in You don’t have to put names of places in quotation marks, just capitalize them.
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The footage was published by the spectators. |
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As stated in the rules, the competitors must have dug a grave of sizes 200 centimeters in length, 80 in width and 160 centimeters in-depth as fast as they could. As stated in the rules, the competitors It sounds more natural to take out “in size”, because it seems a bit unnecessary. “Must have dug” kind of gives the feeling that we’re guessing what the competitors did, so it sounds more natural not to use it, since we actually know the way they dug the graves (if that makes sense).
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Any actual worker of the funeral service from any region of Russia and Commonwealth of Independent States above the age of 18 was allowed participate in the competition. |
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According to the event managers, "The Grave Mayhem" should rise the funeral work execution's level and draw the attention of the youth to the funeral service worker profession. According to the event managers, "The Grave Mayhem" should raise the funeral work execution's level and draw the attention of the youth to the funeral service worker profession. |
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Any actual worker of the funeral service from any region of Russia and Commonwealth of Independent States above the age of 18 was allowed to participate in the competition. Any It’s okay to leave out “actual”.
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