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akihello

June 22, 2021

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That's the Life.

“What does your dream home look like?”

I wish I had a new place. It would be big, clean, and cozy. I would invite people and play some board games.
However, I don't think I can move into a new place for now. I barely survive day by day.


「あなたのドリームホームは、どんな感じのものですか?」

新しい家、あったらいいな、とは思います。大きくて、きれいで、居心地のいい所。人を呼んでボードゲームをしたりしたい。
でも、今のところ、新しい所に引っ越すとか無理です。一日一日を生きるので精一杯です。

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That's the Life.

“What does your dream home look like?”

I wish I had a new place.

It would be big, clean, and cozy.

I would invite people andto play some board games.

What you wrote is correct. This is another way to write it.

However, I don't think I can move into a new place for now.

I barely survive day by day.

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残念ですね。そのうち、大きい家に引っ越すのといいです。

作文はよく出来ました。

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akihello

June 23, 2021

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Thank you for the correction!
訂正してくださり、ありがとうございました!

That's the Life.

“What does your dream home look like?”

I wish I had a new place.

It would be big, clean, and cozy.

I would invite people and play some board games.

I would invite people andto play some board games.

However, I don't think I can move into a new place for now.

I barely survive day by day.

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