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naho2863

Aug. 8, 2022

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Summer mistakes.

I make a lot of mistakes, I like learning not only how to speak or write in English but know how the natives tend to speak.
I think there is a big difference between that and I get a little excited when I understand.
And this summer especially, I started on this site and I like how other people can correct your writing.


Cometo muchos errores, me gusta no solo hablar o escribir en ingles pero también saber como los nativos tienden a hablar.
Creo que hay una gran diferencia entre eso y me emociono un poco cuando entiendo.
Y este verano especialmente, empecé en este sitio y me gusta como otras personas pueden corregir tu escritura.

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Summer mistakes.

I make a lot of mistakes,. I like learning not only how to speak orand write in English but knowing how the natives tend to speak.

This works better as two sentences or "I make a lot of mistakes because I like learning..."

I think there is a big difference between thatese types of learning(?) and I get a little excited when I understand what people say.

I wasn't 100% sure what you meant by "that" so I have corrected this

And this summer especially, I started on this site and I(I) like how other people can correct your writing.

The second "I" is optional because you have used it for the first verb in the sentence. The sentence flows a bit better without it.

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Well done! Making mistakes is the best way to learn, even if it can make you feel a bit vulnerable sometimes!

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naho2863

Aug. 8, 2022

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Thank you so much!

Summer mMistakes.

This is a title so we capitalize the first letter of important words. We don't use a period (.) to end the name of a piece of writing.

I make a lot of mistakes,. I like learning about not only how to speak or write in English but knowalso about how the natives tend to speak.

I think there is a big difference between that and I get a little excited when I understand.

And this summer especially, I started writing on this site and I like how other people can correct your writing.

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Welcome to LangCorrect! Good job!

Summer mistakes.Mistakes during the Summer / A Summer of Mistakes / Summer Mistakes

I always make a lot of mistakes, I like learning not only how to speak or write in English, but know how thealso to learn the way natives tend to speak.

Always implies a habit here: we always say it in this way!

‘The way’ here helps ‘tend to speak’; it implies a method, that is why I have put this!

Repeating ‘to learn’ also adds coherency :)

I think there is a big difference between that and I get a little excitedlearning that and the excitement I feel when I understand.

(event 1) and when + next event. In a comparison, if this doesn’t make sense let me know !

And this summer especially, I just started onusing this site and I like how other people can correct your writing.

We always say ‘using’ in relation to the website/service/program.
“I just started using Spotify.”

I put in ‘just’ as it implies an event that happened recently!

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Awesome work!

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naho2863

Aug. 9, 2022

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Thank you!

Summer mistakes.

Summer mMistakes.

Summer mistakes.Mistakes during the Summer / A Summer of Mistakes / Summer Mistakes

I make a lot of mistakes, I like learning not only how to speak or write in English but know how the natives tend to speak.

I make a lot of mistakes,. I like learning not only how to speak orand write in English but knowing how the natives tend to speak.

I make a lot of mistakes,. I like learning about not only how to speak or write in English but knowalso about how the natives tend to speak.

I always make a lot of mistakes, I like learning not only how to speak or write in English, but know how thealso to learn the way natives tend to speak.

I think there is a big difference between that and I get a little excited when I understand.

I think there is a big difference between thatese types of learning(?) and I get a little excited when I understand what people say.

I think there is a big difference between that and I get a little excited when I understand.

I think there is a big difference between that and I get a little excitedlearning that and the excitement I feel when I understand.

And this summer especially, I started on this site and I like how other people can correct your writing.

And this summer especially, I started on this site and I(I) like how other people can correct your writing.

And this summer especially, I started writing on this site and I like how other people can correct your writing.

And this summer especially, I just started onusing this site and I like how other people can correct your writing.

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