July 20, 2022
Summer heat
I suffered this spring because of the heat so this summer was worse and past week I had a heatstroke.
I can't go outside because of the sun but I like it more that way.
Sufrí esta primavera por el calor así que este verano fue peor y la semana pasada tuve un golpe de calor.
No puedo salir por el sol pero me gusta más de esa manera.
Summer heat
I suffered this spring because of the heat so this summer was worseThis summer was worse than this spring due to the heat, and plast week I haexperienced a heatstroke.
Sentence was a little difficult to understand
I can't go outside because of the sun but I like it moreprefer it that way.
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You’ve done a great job, I know you will be fluent in no time. Kudos👍
July 22, 2022
I suffered this spring because of the heat so this summer was worseThis summer was worse than this spring due to the heat, and plast week I haexperienced a heatstroke.
Sentence was a little difficult to understand
Ooh I didn't expect a change like that. I like it.
I suffered this spring because of the heat so, since this summer was worse and, this past week I had a heatstroke.
I can't go outside because of the sun but I like it more thatis way.
This sounds more natural in the US.
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I'm so saddened to hear this. I hope you feel better soon! Great job with the writing!
July 22, 2022
I'm fine and thanks!
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I suffered this spring because of the heat so this summer was worse and past week I had a heatstroke.
Sentence was a little difficult to understand
I suffered this spring because of the heat so, since this summer was worse I suffered this spring because of the heat |
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I can't go outside because of the sun but I like it more that way. I can't go outside because of the sun but I I can't go outside because of the sun but I like it more th This sounds more natural in the US.
I can't go outside because of the sun, but I like it more that way. |
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