March 6, 2021
Strawberry Jam
I bought strawberries at a greengrocer yesterday. I got home and looked them closely, most of them were too ripe. So, I decided to make strawberry jam. It was my first time making jam by myself. I've read a cooking manga about how to make it. It didn't seem it was difficult. I don't like something too much sweet, so I reduced sugar. After 30 minutes, I could make jam easily. It was a bit sour, but I like sour food. Next morning, I had toast with the jam. It was really good. I wanted to have one more, but I'm on a diet, so I didn't do it.
Strawberry Jam
I bought strawberries at a greengrocer’s yesterday.
A “greengrocer” is a person, while the “greengrocer’s” is a shop.
You can also say that you bought strawberries from a greengrocer.
I got home and looked them closely, m. Most of them were too ripe.
So, I decided to make strawberry jam.
It was my first time making jam by myself.
I've had read a cooking manga about how to make it.
You are technically correct! But in this context, you could use ‘had’ to show that you read the manga before you made the jam —> I had read...
It didn't seem it was difficult.
I don't like something too muchfood that is too sweet, so I reduced the amount of sugar.
After 30 minutes, I could make jam easily.
It was a bit sour, but I like sour food.
NThe next morning, I had toast with the jam.
It was really good.
I wanted to have one more, but I'm on a diet, so I didn't do it.
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Great job! Your strawberry jam sounds tasty :)
March 6, 2021
Thank you for the corrections! Yeah, it was really good. I'll make another again.😊
I got home and looked at them closely, most of them were too ripe.
After 30 minutes, I could make jam easily.
It was a bit sour, but I like sour food.
It was really good.
I wanted to have one more, but I'm on a diet, so I didn't do it.
March 6, 2021
Thank you for the correction.🙂
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Strawberry Jam |
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I bought strawberries at a greengrocer yesterday. I bought strawberries at a greengrocer’s yesterday. A “greengrocer” is a person, while the “greengrocer’s” is a shop.
You can also say that you bought strawberries from a greengrocer. |
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I got home and looked them closely, most if them are too ripe. |
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So, I decided to make strawberry jam. |
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It was my first time making jam by myself. |
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I've read how to make it on a manga. |
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It didn't seem it was difficult. It didn't seem |
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I don't like something too much sweet, so I reduced sugar. I don't like |
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After 30 minutes, I could make jam easily. |
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It was a bit sour, but I like sour food. |
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Next morning, I had toast with the jam.
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It was really good. |
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I wanted to have one more, but I'm on a diet, so I didn't eat one more. |
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I got home and looked them closely, most of them were too ripe. I got home and looked them closely I got home and looked at them closely, most of them were too ripe. |
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I've read a cooking manga about how to make it. I You are technically correct! But in this context, you could use ‘had’ to show that you read the manga before you made the jam —> I had read...
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I wanted to have one more, but I'm on a diet, so I didn't do it. |
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