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mikethrandir

May 17, 2021

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Spring and Summer

Are you allergic to something? I have Spring allergies, and it's excruciating. Why does it even have to exist? I would love Spring if it wasn't for that little detail that I can't breathe, and itchy eyes. Spring could be great because the temperature it's not too warm, not too cold, just something nice in the middle. But I can't enjoy it while the pollen floating in the air is thoroughly trying to kill me.
The silver lining is that I'm taking pills to reduced the symptoms, so it's almost bearable. I can also take advantage of the many wonderful things that Spring could offer (for example, gardens and green places in the city looking so beautiful). It's amazing being so comfortable wearing t-shirts and shorts, feeling the breeze and the sun. Because sooner than later Summer will be here, and it would be impossible to not be sweating and too hot to function. Damn, I really hate Summer! I only love it when I'm on vacation and I can refresh in a swimming pool or the sea. What do you think about Summer and Spring?

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I have Sspring allergies, and it's excruciating.

I would love Sspring if it wasn't for thate little detail that I can't breathe, and my itchy eyes.

Spring could be great because the temperature it's not too warm, not too cold, just something nice in the middle.

But I can't enjoy it while the pollen floating in the air is thoroughly trying to kill me.

The silver lining is that I'm taking pills to reduced the symptoms, so it's almost bearable.

I can also take advantage of the many wonderful things that Sspring could offers (for example, gardens and green places in the city looking so beautiful).

It's amazing being so comfortable wearing t-shirts and shorts, feeling the breeze and the sun.

Because sooner than later Ssummer will be here, and it wouldill be impossible to not be sweating and too hot to function.

Damn, I really hate Ssummer!

I only love it when I'm on vacation and I can refresh myself in a swimming pool or the sea.

What do you think about Ssummer and Sspring?

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great job!

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mikethrandir

June 2, 2021

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Thank you! I've been absent, but now I'm back and I'm happy to see your corrections:)

Spring and Summer

Are you allergic to something?

I have Spring allergies, and it's excruciating.

I have Sspring allergies, and it's excruciating.

Why does it even have to exist?

I would love Spring if it wasn't for that little detail that I can't breathe, and itchy eyes.

I would love Sspring if it wasn't for thate little detail that I can't breathe, and my itchy eyes.

Spring could be great because the temperature it's not too warm, not too cold, just something nice in the middle.

Spring could be great because the temperature it's not too warm, not too cold, just something nice in the middle.

But I can't enjoy it while the pollen floating in the air is thoroughly trying to kill me.

The silver lining is that I'm taking pills to reduced the symptoms, so it's almost bearable.

I can also take advantage of the many wonderful things that Spring could offer (for example, gardens and green places in the city looking so beautiful).

I can also take advantage of the many wonderful things that Sspring could offers (for example, gardens and green places in the city looking so beautiful).

It's amazing being so comfortable wearing t-shirts and shorts, feeling the breeze and the sun.

Because sooner than later Summer will be here, and it would be impossible to not be sweating and too hot to function.

Because sooner than later Ssummer will be here, and it wouldill be impossible to not be sweating and too hot to function.

Damn, I really hate Summer!

Damn, I really hate Ssummer!

I only love it when I'm on vacation and I can refresh in a swimming pool or the sea.

I only love it when I'm on vacation and I can refresh myself in a swimming pool or the sea.

What do you think about Summer and Spring?

What do you think about Ssummer and Sspring?

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