May 24, 2021
Something Small and Cute
"Chiikawa" (something small and cute in English) is the title of a comic strip that is popular on Twitter. The creator posts one scene every day, and the story is continuing now. The main characters are something small and cute, which resembles cats. Their behavior is cute but their job is a hunter that subdues monsters. Therefore, they sometimes fall into a crisis. The story is sometimes disquiet and sudden, so people consider the world-building and plot. The harmony of cuteness and irrationality is the reason for popularity.
Something Small and Cute
"Chiikawa" (which means something small and cute in English) is the title of a comic strip that is popular on Twitter.
The creator posts one scene every day, and the story is continuing now.
Since you wrote that he posts a scene every day, it is clear that the story is continuously posted, so you don't need to add that extra information.
The main characters are somethingcreatures that are small and cute, whichand they resembles cats.
Their behavior is cute, but their job is ay are hunters that subdues monsters.
Therefore, they sometimes fall into a crisis.
The story is sometimes disquiet and sudden, so people consider the world-building and plot.
I'm not really sure what you mean here by "so people consider the world-building and plot". Do you want to try to rewrite the sentence, and I can try to correct the new version?
The harmony of cuteness and irrationality is the reason for its popularity.
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Nice journal! Most of my corrections were suggestions on how to make your sentences sound more natural :D
May 25, 2021
Thank you for your correction!
At the line 6, I wanted to express that the readers often think about what that scene implies, or what character has a major role.
May 25, 2021
Okay, then I would write the sentence like this:
"Because the story is sometimes disquiet and sudden, readers often think about what a scene implies, or what character has a major role."
May 26, 2021
I got it. Thank you!
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"Chiikawa" (something small and cute in English) is the title of a comic strip that is popular on Twitter. "Chiikawa" (which means something small and cute in English) is the title of a comic strip that is popular on Twitter. |
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The creator posts one scene every day, and the story is continuing now. The creator posts one scene every day Since you wrote that he posts a scene every day, it is clear that the story is continuously posted, so you don't need to add that extra information.
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The main characters are something small and cute, which resembles cats. The main characters are |
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Their behavior is cute but their job is a hunter that subdues monsters. Their behavior is cute, but the |
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Therefore, they sometimes fall into a crisis. |
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The story is sometimes disquiet and sudden, so people consider the world-building and plot. The story is sometimes disquiet and sudden, so people consider the world-building and plot. I'm not really sure what you mean here by "so people consider the world-building and plot". Do you want to try to rewrite the sentence, and I can try to correct the new version?
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The harmony of cuteness and irrationality is the reason for popularity. The harmony of cuteness and irrationality is the reason for its popularity. |
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