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Ducky

Nov. 25, 2021

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Some Contradictions

Yes, the United States. I think it is a beautiful and very atractive country, but with some contradictions. First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seem that could be better. Second, the weapons. That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seem a mad thing.

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Some Contradictions

Yes, the United States.

I think it is a beautiful and very atractive country, but with some contradictions.

First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seems that it could be better.

"Seems" is the correct conjugation.

Second, the weapons.

That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seems like a mad thing.

See above.

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Good job!

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Ducky

Nov. 26, 2021

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Thanks.

Some Contradictions

Yes, the United States.

I think it is a beautiful and very atractive country, but with some contradictions.

I think it is a beautiful and very attractive country, but with some contradictions.

First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seem that could be better.

First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seems that it could be better.

Second, the weapons.

That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seem a mad thing.

That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seem a mad thing.

The fact that anybody can carry a weapon anywhere seems mad.

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As an American, I agree! Our healthcare is awful and I also can't understand the people that think it takes away their liberty to not be able to have a gun in Walmart.

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Ducky

Nov. 26, 2021

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Thanks for your correction and reply.

Some Contradictions

Yes, the United States.

I think it is a beautiful and very atractive country, but with some contradictions.

I think it is a beautiful and very attractive country, but with some contradictions.

First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seem that could be better.

First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seems that it could be better.

First, the health system, I don't understand it very well, but it seems that it could be better.

Second, the weapons.

That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seem a mad thing.

That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seem a mad thing.

That all people can carry weapons at anywhere, seems like a mad thing.

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