Nov. 30, 2020
Smoking should be banned?
Some people say that smoking should be prohibited. I totally agree with this view.
To begin with, smoking has a detrimental influence on the human body. It is well known that people who smoke are easier to contract fatal diseases like lung cancer, which results in a decrease in persons’ lifespan. An investigation conducted by the WTO demonstrated that non-smokers have good health conditions and longer life than those who are addicted to smoke. In this way, this country will suffer from workforce shortage, which in turn hinders the economic growth.
What is more, smoking in public has undesirable effects on others. As the smell of smoke is hatred by those who do not smoke, smoking in public is considered rude and selfish behavior. Secondly, smoking will have a negative influence on people around them, damage caused by smoking to non-smokers is worse than those who smoke, especially for certain groups like pregnant women, kids and the elderly. For pregnant women, for example, the harmful chemical matters from cigarettes can deter the development of infants’ brain. In this case, what a heavy smoker father does to his unborn baby is a crime.
In conclusion, I believe that smoke should be prohibited not only for the health of smoke addicts but also for the people around them.
Smoking shouldhould smoking be banned?
Some people say that smoking should be prohibited.
I totally agree with this (point of) view.
To begin with, smoking has a detrimental influence on the human body.
It is well known that people who smoke are easier tohave a higher risk of contracting fatal diseases like lung cancer, which results in a decrease in persons’their lifespan.
Or perhaps closer to what you wrote: "... people who smoke contract fatal diseases like lung cancer more easily..."
An investigation conducted by the WTO demonstrated that non-smokers have good health (conditions) and live longer life than those who are addicted to smokeing.
In this way, this country will suffer from workforce shortage, which in turn hinders the economic growth.
What is more, smoking in public has undesirable effects on others.
As the smell of smoke is hatred by those who do not smoke, smoking in public is considered a rude and selfish behavior.
Secondly, smoking will have a negative influence on people around them, d. Damage caused by smoking to non-smokers is worse than to those who smoke, especially for certain groups like pregnant women, kids and the elderly.
For pregnant women, for example, the harmful chemical matters froms in cigarettes can deter/halt the development of an infants’ brain.
In this case, what a heavy smoker father does to his unborn baby is a crime.
In conclusion, I believe that smokeing should be prohibited not only for the health of smokeing addicts but also for the health of the people around them.
Dec. 1, 2020
Thank you so much!
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Smoking should be banned? S |
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Some people say that smoking should be prohibited. |
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I totally agree with this view. I totally agree with this (point of) view. |
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To begin with, smoking has a detrimental influence on the human body. |
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It is well known that people who smoke are easier to contract fatal diseases like lung cancer, which results in a decrease in persons’ lifespan. It is well known that people who smoke Or perhaps closer to what you wrote: "... people who smoke contract fatal diseases like lung cancer more easily..."
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An investigation conducted by the WTO demonstrated that non-smokers have good health conditions and longer life than those who are addicted to smoke. An investigation conducted by the WTO demonstrated that non-smokers have good health (conditions) and live longer |
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In this way, this country will suffer from workforce shortage, which in turn hinders the economic growth. In this way, this country will suffer from workforce shortage, which in turn hinders |
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What is more, smoking in public has undesirable effects on others. |
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As the smell of smoke is hatred by those who do not smoke, smoking in public is considered rude and selfish behavior. As the smell of smoke is hat |
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Secondly, smoking will have a negative influence on people around them, damage caused by smoking to non-smokers is worse than those who smoke, especially for certain groups like pregnant women, kids and the elderly. Secondly, smoking will have a negative influence on people around them |
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For pregnant women, for example, the harmful chemical matters from cigarettes can deter the development of infants’ brain. For pregnant women, for example, the harmful chemical |
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In this case, what a heavy smoker father does to his unborn baby is a crime. |
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In conclusion, I believe that smoke should be prohibited not only for the health of smoke addicts but also for the people around them. In conclusion, I believe that smok |
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