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kyoko

Nov. 17, 2019

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Shopping

Today I went shopping with my husband and son. We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!
My son found a shop that my husband likes so much.
There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!
My son took it to a shop staff while saying “this is my dad’s birthday present!”
We all had fun the time :)


今日、私は夫と息子と一緒に買い物に行きました。夫の誕生日プレゼントを探していたのです。
息子が、夫の大好きなお店を見つけました。
私の夫は、かっこいいリュックに一目ぼれ!
息子が「お父さんの誕生日プレゼントです!」と言いながら、それをお店の人に持っていきました。
私たちみんなでいい時間を過ごしました。

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Shopping

Today I went shopping with my husband and son.

We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!

My son found a shop that my husband likes so muchreally liked.

There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!

My son took it to a shop stafftaff member while saying “tThis is my dad’s birthday present!

'staff'は日本語と違って、必ず複数形です。単数形はstaff memberです。

We all had a fun the time :)

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I hope your husband enjoys (or enjoyed) his birthday!

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kyoko

Nov. 17, 2019

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My son took it to a shop stafftaff member while saying “tThis is my dad’s birthday present!

'staff'は日本語と違って、必ず複数形です。単数形はstaff memberです。

Aaaaah I made this mistake again!!!
日本語での「スタッフ」で勘違いしてしまうんですよね😵気をつけます!

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kyoko

Nov. 17, 2019

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Thank you so much for correction!
Yes, my husband really enjoyed his birthday with the new backpack ;)

Shopping

Today I went shopping with my husband and son.

We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!

There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!

Shopping

Today I went shopping with my husband and son.

We were looking for something for my husband’s birthday!

My son found a shop that my husband likes so much.

My son found a shop that my husband likes so muchreally liked.

There was a cool backpack and my husband fell in love with it at first sight!

My son took it to a shop staff while saying “this is my dad’s birthday present!

My son took it to a shop stafftaff member while saying “tThis is my dad’s birthday present!

We all had fun the time :)

We all had a fun the time :)

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