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ponta

Sept. 6, 2021

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Self-Introduction

I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one is written almost one year ago.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan. I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering. I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities. It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English. I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.
Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners through this site. I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and like reading books. If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as far as possible.

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Self-Introduction

I would like to changupdate my self-introduction because the current one iwas written almost onea year ago.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan.

I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering.

I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities.

It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.

I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.

Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners through this site.

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and I like reading books.

If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as farhelpfully as possible.

ponta's avatar
ponta

Sept. 7, 2021

217

Thank you so much!

Self-Introduction

I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one iwas written almost onea year ago.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan.

It's fine to say "university student", but I don't believe any native speakers would introduce themselves as a "university student". They would just say that they're "a student" or "at uni/university" (in the US they would say they're at college).

I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering.

I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities.

It is also fun for me to learnacquire new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.

The original sentence is fine, but "learn knowledge" sounds rather awkward. You typically say you pick up knowledge, gain knowledge, acquire knowledge, and so on. More colloquially you could say "learn new things about English".

I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.

Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners throughon this site.

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and like reading books.

If you have any questions about Japanese andor Japan, I will answer as far as possibleto the best of my ability.

ponta's avatar
ponta

Sept. 7, 2021

217

Thank you for the corrections!

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bronshtein

Sept. 7, 2021

2

No problem

Self-Introduction

I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one is written almost one year ago.

I would like to change my self-introduction because the current one iwas written almost onea year ago.

I would like to changupdate my self-introduction because the current one iwas written almost onea year ago.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan.

Hello, I am a university student in Japan.

I am a junior now and majoring in aerospace engineering.

I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities.

I am learning English because it is necessary for research activities.

It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.

It is also fun for me to learnacquire new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.

It is also fun for me to learn new knowledge about English and to interact with others in English.

I appreciate all of your corrections and advice.

Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners through this site.

Additionally, I want to help Japanese learners throughon this site.

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and like reading books.

I am not a specialist in Japanese but I have been educated in Japanese and I like reading books.

If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as far as possible.

If you have any questions about Japanese andor Japan, I will answer as far as possibleto the best of my ability.

If you have any questions about Japanese and Japan, I will answer as farhelpfully as possible.

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