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ponta

March 30, 2021

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Screen Time

Today, I hang out with my friend and used my smartphone only for a short time. I think screen time and fulfillment of the day are in inverse proportion; the more you watch the screen, the less you enjoy the day. I keep in mind not to use my electronic devices for no reason.

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Today, I haung out with my friend and used my smartphone for only for a short time.

hang should be past tense.

I think screen time and daily fulfillment of the day are in an inverse proportionrelationship; the more you watch the screens, the less you enjoy the day.

I think "in inverse proportion" is also correct. I simply changed it because I hear "in an inverse relationship" more often.

I keep in mind to not to use my electronic devices for no reason.

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ponta

March 31, 2021

217

Thank you for your correction!

Today, I haung out with my friend and only briefly used my smartphone only for a short time.

Hang should be past tense.

I think screen time and daily fulfillment of the day are in inversely proportional; the more you watch thelook at screens, the less you enjoy the day.

I keep in mind not togo out of my way to not use my electronic devices for no reason.

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ponta

April 1, 2021

217

Thank you so much!

Screen Time

Today, I hang out with my friend and used my smartphone only for a short time.

Today, I haung out with my friend and used my smartphone for only for a short time.

Today, I haung out with my friend and only briefly used my smartphone only for a short time.

I think screen time and fulfillment of the day are in inverse proportion; the more you watch the screen, the less you enjoy the day.

I think screen time and daily fulfillment of the day are in an inverse proportionrelationship; the more you watch the screens, the less you enjoy the day.

I think screen time and daily fulfillment of the day are in inversely proportional; the more you watch thelook at screens, the less you enjoy the day.

I keep in mind not to use my electronic devices for no reason.

I keep in mind to not to use my electronic devices for no reason.

I keep in mind not togo out of my way to not use my electronic devices for no reason.

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