May 28, 2021
Reports with Intutive Graphics
After weeks of hard work, I have finally finished writing my report.
Not only my superviser, but also the other team leader also gives me compliments.
Actually, I still don't think my report is good quality because there is no clear conclusion.
Because the deadline was closer, so I decided to choose between perfect conclusion and intuitive graphics for the contents of the report.
In the end, I decided to attach the colorful graphics on my report and it was enough to give my seniors' impression.
I realize that now I have one forte of my work.
Reports with Intutive Graphics
After weeks of hard work, I have finally finished writing my report.
Not only my superviseor, but also the other team leader galso gives me compliments.
You don't need the second also as you are just repeating yourself,
Actually, I still don't think my report is good quality because there is no clear conclusion.
Because the deadline was closer, so, I decided to choose between perfect conclusion and intuitive graphics for the contents of the report.
Don't need the "so" as you used "because". Either use "Because the deadline was close, I decided..." or use "The deadline was close, so I decided..."
In the end, I decided to attach the colorful graphics on my report and it was enough to give my seniors' impression.
Are you trying to say that you impressed your supervisor?
I realize that now I have one forte of my work.
I don't know what one forte of my work is. Are you trying to say you have done one fourth of my work?
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Really well done :)
June 3, 2021
Thanks for your corrections to my humble sentences.
June 3, 2021
In the end, I decided to attach the colorful graphics on my report and it was enough to give my seniors' impression.
Are you trying to say that you impressed your supervisor?
That's right, my superviser really liked my report.
June 10, 2021
That's right, my superviser really liked my report.
It is a bit more natural to say that it was enough to impress my supervisor. Saying 'to give my seniors' impression' can mean a lot of things and is not all that clear.
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After weeks of hard work, I have finally finished writing my report. |
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Not only my superviser, but also the other team leader also gives me compliments. Not only my supervis You don't need the second also as you are just repeating yourself,
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Actually, I still don't think my report is good quality because there is no clear conclusion. |
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Because the deadline was closer, so I decided to choose between perfect conclusion and intuitive graphics for the contents of the report. Because the deadline was close Don't need the "so" as you used "because". Either use "Because the deadline was close, I decided..." or use "The deadline was close, so I decided..."
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In the end, I decided to attach the colorful graphics on my report and it was enough to give my seniors' impression. In the end, I decided to attach the colorful graphics on my report and it was enough to give my seniors' impression. Are you trying to say that you impressed your supervisor?
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I realize that now I have one forte of my work. I realize that now I have one forte of my work. I don't know what one forte of my work is. Are you trying to say you have done one fourth of my work?
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