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Feb. 26, 2021

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Reason why I love this school

There are many reasons why I want to apply the pre-master programme in International Business at Munich Business School in Germany. Firstly, Germany boasts a superior education system with many qualified teaching resources and universities. Secondly, Germany owns the most advanced technologies, rigorous academic attitude and international exchanging atmosphere. Thirdly, as a prestigious private university for business in Munich, MBS is not only accredited by state but also by German Council of Science and Humanities. And it has always been offering globally minded, entrepreneurial personalities an inspiring and international academic environment to develop into the responsible leaders of tomorrow. Most importantly, the well-designed curricular and various seminar provided by this programme enable me to lay the solid foundation for my future career path. Specifically, in addition to general business administration and courses in international marketing and international finance, it offers specific focal points like Digital Business Management, International Marketing, and Corporate Strategy & Innovation etc., which gives my studies an individual aspect. Besides, with an interdisciplinary structure, the core modules allow me to work on joint projects with students from the other Master’ s programs as well as exchange ideas and experiences. Moreover, by completing the electives, I will round off my profile and set further individual accents.

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Reason why I love this school

There are many reasons why I want to apply to the pre-master programme in International Business at Munich Business School in Germany.

Secondly, Germany ownhas the most advanced technologies, rigorous academic attitude and international exchanging atmosphere.

Thirdly, as a prestigious private university for business in Munich, MBS is not only accredited by the state but also by German Council of Science and Humanities.

And it has always been offering globally minded, entrepreneurial personalities an inspiring and international academic environment to develop into the responsible leaders of tomorrow.

Most importantly, the well-designed curricularum and various seminars provided by this programme enable me to lay the solid foundation for my future career path.

“Curricula” might also work as a plural. (Plurals can be weird for latin words.)

Specifically, in addition to general business administration and courses in international marketing and international finance, it offers specific focal points like Digital Business Management, International Marketing, and Corporate Strategy & Innovation etc., which gives my studies an individual aspect.

Besides, with an interdisciplinary structure, the core modules allow me to work on joint projects with students from the other Master’ s programs as well as exchange ideas and experiences.

Moreover, by completing the electives, I will round off my profile and set further individual accents.

Accents? Individual accents? No idea what you mean here.

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Mostly really good! Very formal style.

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ricky

Feb. 27, 2021

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Thank you so much~ it’s a great help

Reason why I love this school

There are many reasons why I want to apply the pre-master programme in International Business at Munich Business School in Germany.

There are many reasons why I want to apply to the pre-master programme in International Business at Munich Business School in Germany.

Firstly, Germany boasts a superior education system with many qualified teaching resources and universities.

Secondly, Germany owns the most advanced technologies, rigorous academic attitude and international exchanging atmosphere.

Secondly, Germany ownhas the most advanced technologies, rigorous academic attitude and international exchanging atmosphere.

Thirdly, as a prestigious private university for business in Munich, MBS is not only accredited by state but also by German Council of Science and Humanities.

Thirdly, as a prestigious private university for business in Munich, MBS is not only accredited by the state but also by German Council of Science and Humanities.

And it has always been offering globally minded, entrepreneurial personalities an inspiring and international academic environment to develop into the responsible leaders of tomorrow.

Most importantly, the well-designed curricular and various seminar provided by this programme enable me to lay the solid foundation for my future career path.

Most importantly, the well-designed curricularum and various seminars provided by this programme enable me to lay the solid foundation for my future career path.

Specifically, in addition to general business administration and courses in international marketing and international finance, it offers specific focal points like Digital Business Management, International Marketing, and Corporate Strategy & Innovation etc., which gives my studies an individual aspect.

Besides, with an interdisciplinary structure, the core modules allow me to work on joint projects with students from the other Master’ s programs as well as exchange ideas and experiences.

Moreover, by completing the electives, I will round off my profile and set further individual accents.

Moreover, by completing the electives, I will round off my profile and set further individual accents.

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