Jan. 18, 2022
Peace
It is cold and cloudy today. At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listeing to a podcast. As the time gose by, it is getting colder and colder. Hence, I start to check my palnts. Most of them are growing well.
Then I go downstairs, standing in the balcony, while still listening to the padcast. It is dark, but I choose not turn on the lights. It is so silent outside, what I hear is the sounds from my headphones. I feel taht I'm overwhelming in the dark, and I feel fairly peaceful.
Peace
It is cold and cloudy today.
At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listening to a podcast.
As the time goses by, it is getting colder and colder.
Hence, I start to check my palants.
Most of them are growing well.
Then I go downstairs, and standing i on the balcony, while still listening to the paodcast.
It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights.
It is so silent outside, what I; all I can hear is the sounds from my headphones.
I feel tahat I'm overwhelming in the dark, and I feel fairly peaceful.
I'm not sure what you are trying to say here.
At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listening to a podcast.
As the time goses by, it is gettings colder and colder.
Hence, I startI decide to check on my palants.
"Hence" is a bit formal here
Then I go downstairs, standing i on the balcony, while stilland continue to listening to the paodcast.
Some of the tenses here are a little off
It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights.
It is so silent outside, what Iall I can hear is the sounds from my headphones.
I feel tahat I'm overwhelming ined by the dark, andbut I feel fairly peaceful.
Feedback
That was really nice and peaceful to read :)
Jan. 19, 2022
Thank you.
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Peace |
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It is cold and cloudy today. |
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At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listeing to a podcast. At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor, and listening to a podcast. At dusk, I am sitting on the top floor |
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As the time gose by, it is getting colder and colder. As the time go As |
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Hence, I start to check my palnts.
"Hence" is a bit formal here
Hence, I start to check my p |
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Most of them are growing well. |
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Then I go downstairs, standing in the balcony, while still listening to the padcast. Then I go downstairs, stand Some of the tenses here are a little off
Then I go downstairs |
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It is dark, but I choose not turn on the lights. It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights. It is dark, but I choose not to turn on the lights. |
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It is so silent outside, what I hear is the sounds from my headphones. It is so silent outside, It is so silent outside |
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I feel taht I'm overwhelming in the dark, and I feel fairly peaceful. I feel t I feel t I'm not sure what you are trying to say here.
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