Dec. 29, 2020
noises
There is so much noise in our lives. For example, every morning we can hear the noise of machines humming in factories nearby. When we go to work, we can hear the constant roar of the traffic in the streets. Even when we go back home and we want to ramble outside for a while to relax, we can hear the ear-splitting sound of aircraft passing over our heads. In the evening, sometimes we could hear raucous laughter coming from the party next door or the muffled sound of music from the flat above us. When we go to sleep, we are also disrupted by excessive noise at midnight. It seems impossible for us to enjoy a tranquil time. So it is of great significance to take some measures to tackle this issue. Firstly, we could negotiate with our neighbors about the time after 10pm when they should not make noise. Or at weekends we want to sleep in, they could turn down their voices. In terms of noises in the road or from construction fields, governments should take the responsibility to limit the time when divers can honk horns and workers can start to build houses.
noises
There is so much noise in our lives.
For example, every morning we can hear the noise of machines humming in factories nearby.
When we go to work, we can hear the constant roar of the traffic in the streets.
The "the" is still okay, but it is best without it here.
Even when we go back home and we want to rambletake a walk outside for a while to relax, we can hear the ear-splitting sound of aircrafts passing over our heads.
"ramble" is still okay, but it is uncommon to use in this way.
In the evening, sometimes we couldan hear raucous laughter coming from the party next door or the muffled sound of music from the flat above us.
Firstly, we could negotiate with our neighbors about the time after 10pm when they should not make noisenot making noise after 10pm.
Or aton weekends when we want to sleep in, they could turn downlower their voices.
In terms of noises in the road or from construction fieldzones, governments should take the responsibility to limit the time when drivers can honk horns and workers can start to build houses.
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Dec. 29, 2020
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There is so much noise in our lives.
For example, every morning we can hear the noise of machines humming in factories nearby.
When we go to work, we can hear the constant roar of the traffic in the streets.
I think "the traffic" is correct, but it sounds clunky.
Even when we go back home and we want to ramblego outside for a whilestroll to relax, we can hear the ear-splitting sound ofpiercing aircraft sounds passing over our heads.
"ramble" is an obscure word; I think most people would not have heard of this word.
the "can" is not needed
"ear-splitting" sounds a bit too strong
I'm a bit uncomfortable with "sound of aircraft"; it naturally should be "sound of aircrafts", but "aircrafts" is also a bit peculiar.
In the evening, sometimes we could hear raucous laughter coming from the party next door or the muffled sounds of music from the flat above us.
When we go to sleep, we are also disrupted by excessive noise at midduring the night.
What you wrote is correct, but this implies at precisely 12.00 midnight there is noise.
It seems impossible for us to enjoy a moment of tranquil timeity.
"enjoy a tranquil time" is correct, but sounds unnatural
So it is of great significanceimportant to take some measures to tackle this issue.
I feel "significance" is an incorrect choice of word here. Moreover, "of great significance" is excessive.
I suggest this instead: "So it is important that we take some steps to alleviate this problem.
Firstlyor example, we could negotiate withask our neighbors about the time after 10pm when they should not make noiseto keep it down after 10pm.
Or aton weekends when we want to sleep in, they could turn downkeep their voices down.
In terms of noises in the road or fromFor road and construction fieldsnoise, governments should take the responsibility toand limit the time when drivers can honkare allowed to honk their horns and workers can start to buildconstruct houses.
Dec. 29, 2020
Thank you so much~ I will review it now~
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There is so much noise in our lives. |
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For example, every morning we can hear the noise of machines humming in factories nearby. |
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When we go to work, we can hear the constant roar of the traffic in the streets. When we go to work, we can hear the constant roar of The "the" is still okay, but it is best without it here.
When we go to work, we can hear the constant roar of I think "the traffic" is correct, but it sounds clunky.
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Even when we go back home and we want to ramble outside for a while to relax, we can hear the ear-splitting sound of aircraft passing over our heads. Even when we go back home and we want to "ramble" is still okay, but it is uncommon to use in this way.
Even when we go back home and we want to "ramble" is an obscure word; I think most people would not have heard of this word.
the "can" is not needed "ear-splitting" sounds a bit too strong I'm a bit uncomfortable with "sound of aircraft"; it naturally should be "sound of aircrafts", but "aircrafts" is also a bit peculiar. |
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In the evening, sometimes we could hear raucous laughter coming from the party next door or the muffled sound of music from the flat above us. In the evening, sometimes we c In the evening, sometimes we |
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When we go to sleep, we are also disrupted by excessive noise at midnight. When we go to sleep, we are also disrupted by excessive noise What you wrote is correct, but this implies at precisely 12.00 midnight there is noise.
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It seems impossible for us to enjoy a tranquil time. It seems impossible for us to enjoy a "enjoy a tranquil time" is correct, but sounds unnatural
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So it is of great significance to take some measures to tackle this issue. So it is I feel "significance" is an incorrect choice of word here. Moreover, "of great significance" is excessive.
I suggest this instead: "So it is important that we take some steps to alleviate this problem. |
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Firstly, we could negotiate with our neighbors about the time after 10pm when they should not make noise. Firstly, we could negotiate with our neighbors about F |
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Or at weekends we want to sleep in, they could turn down their voices. Or Or |
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In terms of noises in the road or from construction fields, governments should take the responsibility to limit the time when divers can honk horns and workers can start to build houses. In terms of noises in the road or from construction
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