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Sept. 13, 2020

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No Internet = No Life? No Internet (2days) = $1000 free mone

https://www.unilad.co.uk/technology/company-will-pay-you-1000-to-go-camping-for-two-days-without-internet/




Few years ago, I heard similar story.

A company offer small amount money if the staff don’t use mobile at work.

This time the above company has this challenge.

Camping 2 days with no internet.

99% of my friends said is too easy!

Maybe is a charitably campaign. (not camping…Www)

If I am the organizer or I can make a suggestion.

Let’s change rule to “more days no internet life, more money gets”.

Now, the economic is bad, the big company should use this kind of games to help poor.

Right?

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No Internet = No Life? No Internet (2 days) = $1000 free money

https://www.unilad.co.uk/technology/company-will-pay-you-1000-to-go-camping-for-two-days-without-internet/

FA few years ago, I heard a similar story.

A company offered a small amount of money if the staff don’idn't use mobile phones at work.

An other suggestion would be:
I was about a company offering a small amount of money if the staff didn't use mobile phones at work.

We never refer to phones as mobiles. They can be referred to as phones, smartphones, cell-phones, or mobile phones. At least where I am, the term mobile phone sounds a bit more dated than the others.

This time the above company has this challenge.

Camping 2 days with no internet.

I would suggest as well:

Camping 2 days without internet.

What you have works though!

99% of my friends said it is too easy!

Maybe it is a charitably campaign.

(not camping…Www)

This doesn't make sense to me.

The w's don't mean anything to me either.

If I amwas the organizer or I canould make a suggestion.

Let’sI would change the rule to “the more days nowithout internet life,, the more money one gets”.

Now, the economicy is bad, the big companyies should use thisese kinds of games to help the poor.

economic is an adjective

You could also say:

Now, the economy is bad, the big companies should use this kind of game to help the poor.

Note how the plurality between this/these and game/games agree

Right?

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Sept. 14, 2020

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thanks

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Sept. 15, 2020

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No Internet = No Life? No Internet (2days) = $1000 free mone

No Internet = No Life? No Internet (2 days) = $1000 free money

https://www.unilad.co.uk/technology/company-will-pay-you-1000-to-go-camping-for-two-days-without-internet/

Few years ago, I heard similar story.

FA few years ago, I heard a similar story.

A company offer small amount money if the staff don’t use mobile at work.

A company offered a small amount of money if the staff don’idn't use mobile phones at work.

This time the above company has this challenge.

Camping 2 days with no internet.

Camping 2 days with no internet.

99% of my friends said is too easy!

99% of my friends said it is too easy!

Maybe is a charitably campaign.

Maybe it is a charitably campaign.

(not camping…Www)

(not camping…Www)

If I am the organizer or I can make a suggestion.

If I amwas the organizer or I canould make a suggestion.

Let’s change rule to “more days no internet life, more money gets”.

Let’sI would change the rule to “the more days nowithout internet life,, the more money one gets”.

Now, the economic is bad, the big company should use this kind of games to help poor.

Now, the economicy is bad, the big companyies should use thisese kinds of games to help the poor.

Right?

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