Oct. 18, 2020
New Professional Farmers
New professional farmers are all talented people in local areas. They are all planting specialized households, breeding specialized households or agricultural machinery specialized households. They hire employees and have considerable income. In addition to this, living in the countryside can get fresh air and eat fresh vegetables. I think it is good for their health and lifespans. So new professional farmers' living qualities are not only not worse than ours, but also much higher than ours.
New Professional Farmers
New professional farmers are all talented people in local areas.
They are all planting specialized households, breeding specialized householdsspecialize in crops, livestock, or agricultural machinery specialized households.
Please let me know if I have misunderstood the meaning of the sentence.
They hire employees and have considerable income.
In addition to this, living in the countryside can getthey can enjoy fresh air and eat fresh vegetables because they live in the countryside.
I think ithis is good for their health and lifespansongevity.
Lifespan is a good word, but longevity sounds more natural here.
So new professional farmers' living qualities are not onlyquality of life is not worse than ours, but alsorather much higher than ours.
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Great job! Just a question of making the sentences sound a little bit more natural.
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New professional farmers are all talented people in local areas. |
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They are all planting specialized households, breeding specialized households or agricultural machinery specialized households. They Please let me know if I have misunderstood the meaning of the sentence.
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They hire employees and have considerable income. |
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In addition to this, living in the countryside can get fresh air and eat fresh vegetables. In addition to this, |
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I think it is good for their health and lifespans. I think Lifespan is a good word, but longevity sounds more natural here.
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So new professional farmers' living qualities are not only not worse than ours, but also much higher than ours. So new professional farmers' |
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