Jan. 11, 2022
Coming into class I had to experience that the average level of English by the attendants is above mine. As a result, I had to make sure that I am able to catch up during this semester. While I have to confess, that the beginning went very slowly in terms of my own motivation, I‘ve started to notice that I made progress in certain aspects of the language. However, I am far away from reaching the level I have set myself for at the end of 2022. For this, I have to make sure to constantly fulfill the task I’ve set for myself every day. Subsequently, I want to describe the tasks I am doing every day in order to set myself up for a better level of English.
In my daily life, I am often not able to communicate without describing the proper vocabulary, which I can't come up with in proper time, therefore I am reading for half an hour books which I bought on my e-reader. While I like reading books in the old fashion, I have to admit that the newer technology has its own benefits. When I find new vocabulary which I do not understand I translate it by holding my finger on the word I don't know the translation of. Afterward, when I assess that they are important enough, I write them down into an app that helps me to learn them. Furthermore I watch my series and movies in English, as this will also help to improve my hearing-comprehension.
Another part at which I lack tremendously is the topic of writing. I feel like I am not able to express myself on paper to an certain level which I am aiming for. Therefore I am writing as often as I can to you guys, as this is helping me to practice the language and also my grammar. Unfortunately, I often do mistakes but you guys help me to an insane amount to get better. Writing down the mistakes you guys found and repeating them helps me to improve my grammar as well. Therefore I am very grateful to have found this website.
Last but not least I have to do my homework and comprehend the sessions with my lecturer as well. I do enjoy the sessions but I would prefer to have them at the university instead of online.
Recently I realized that I need to practise my tenses aswell. As I haven’t found enough exercises based on an certain level I ordered an exam book. I hope it’s not too late, as the exams are starting very soon.
To conclude this I have to say that while admitting that I have big gaps in my usage of this language, I am confident to fill these in the next semesters. I have found tons of motivation which also helps at the long distance.
My self-reflection
Coming into class I had to experiennoticed that the average level of English byof the attendaother students is above mine.
I would use (noticed) because it sounds more like what a native would say.
Refering to (students) as (attendants) is a bit confusing because it could mean that you are the teacher.
As a resultBecause of this, I had to make sure that I am able to catch up during this semester.
(As a result) is just a bit more confusing because a result follows an action and you have to think back to the verb, but using (because of this) you know what you just read so it is faster and more fluent to read.
While I have to confess, that the beginning went very slowly in terms of my own motivation, I‘ve started to notice that I made progress in certain aspects of the language.
However, I am far away from reaching the level I have set for myself for at the end of 2022.
Just a grammar mistake
For this,so I have to make sure to constantly fulfill the task I’ve set for myself every day.
I would combine this sentence with the last one because they are short and closely related
Subsequently, I want to describe the tasks I am doing every day in order to set myself up for a better level of English.
In my daily life, I am often not able to communicate without describing the proper vocabulary, which I can't come up with in proper time, therefore I a'm reading for half an hour books which I bought on my e-reader for half an hour each.
You don't need to have proper before time
Making a contraction to form(I'm) and switching the last part of the sentence around because it's easier to understand if you say the verb before describing with adjectives.
While I like reading books in the old fashioned books, I have to admit that the newer technology has its own benefits.
Saying (in the old fashion) is not something anyone often says
You don't have to include (the) before newer technology
When I find new vocabulary which I do not understand I translate it by holding my finger on the word I don't know the translation of.
Afterward, when I assess that they are important enough, I write them down into an app that helps me to learn them.
Furthermore I watch my series and movies in English, as this will also help to improve my hearing-comprehension.
Another part at whichskill where I lack tremendously is the topic of writing.
Using (where) instead is more fluid and referring to writing as a skill is more accurate
I feel like I am not able to express myself on paper to an certain level which I athat I'm aiming for.
You only use (an) before a word that starts with vowel but you use (a) before a word that starts with a consonant.
Therefore I am writing as often as I can to you guys, as this is helping me to practice the language and also my grammar.
Unfortunately, I often domake mistakes but you guys help me to an insane amount to get better.
People say (make mistakes) instead of (do mistakes)
Writing down the mistakes you guys found and repeating them helps me to improve my grammar as well.
Therefore I am very grateful to have found this website.
Last but not least I have to do my homework and comprehend the sessions with my lecturer as well.
I do enjoy the sessions but I would prefer to have them at the university instead of online.
Recently I realized that I need to practisce my tenses aswell.
Just a spelling mistake for the word (practice)
As I haven’t found enough exercises based on an certain level I ordered an exam book.
I hope it’s not too late, as the exams are starting very soon.
To conclude this I have to say that while admitting that I have big gaps in my usage of this language, I am confident to fill these in the next semesters.
I have found tons of motivation which also helps at the long distance.
You don't need to use (the) before long distance.
Feedback
Your english is very good and I could understand everything that you were trying to convey, however there were some problems with fluency and stylistic choices in your writing. I tried to be very critical but I hope I wasn't too harsh. Very nice job writing, and keep practicing!
My self- reflection
A moment of self reflection
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While I like reading books in the old fashioned way, I have to admit that the newernew reading technology (new E-reading technology) has its own benefits.
has it's own benefits/has a lot to offer
When I find new vocabulary which I do not understand, I translate it by holding my finger on the word I don't know the translation of.
Afterwards, when I assessif i decide that they are important enough, I write them down into an app that helps me to learn them.
learn them/memorise them
FurthermoreIn addition, I watch my favourite series and movies in English, as this will also helps to improve my hearlistening- comprehension.
Another part at which I lack tremendously is the topic ofthing I struggle with is writing.
Writing is another thing I struggle with.
It feels like I a'm not able to express myself on paper to an certain level which I athe degree I'm aiming for.
Therefore I am'll writinge as often as I can to you guys, as this ishould helping me to practice the language and alsos well as my grammar.
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Unfortunately, I often domake mistakes, but you guys help me toby an insane amount to get better.
Last but not least I have to do my homework and comprehendrevise the sessions with my lecturer as well.
I do enjoy the sessions but I would prefer to have them at the university instead of online.
Sessions = Classes? Lectures? Tutorials?
at the university - in person
Recently I realized that I need to practise my tenses as well.
realized = USA
realised = UK
Recently I realised that I need to work on my grammatical tenses.
As I haven’t found enough exercises based on an certainat the right level so I ordered an exam book.
I hope it’s not too late, as the exams are starting very soon.
ToIn conclude thission, I have to sayadmit that while admitting that I have big gaps in my usage of this language, I am confident to fill these inhat I'll be able to work on them throughout the next semesters.
throughout the coming semesters.
I have recently found tons of motivation which alsoreally helps at withe long distance learning.
Feedback
Well done. I saw there was a correction already but hope you can get something from my corrections! :)
My self-reflection My self A moment of self reflection
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Coming into class I had to experience that the average level of English by the attendants is above mine. Coming into class I I would use (noticed) because it sounds more like what a native would say.
Refering to (students) as (attendants) is a bit confusing because it could mean that you are the teacher.
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As a result, I had to make sure that I am able to catch up during this semester.
(As a result) is just a bit more confusing because a result follows an action and you have to think back to the verb, but using (because of this) you know what you just read so it is faster and more fluent to read.
As a result, I had to |
While I have to confess, that the beginning went very slowly in terms of my own motivation, I‘ve started to notice that I made progress in certain aspects of the language.
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However, I am far away from reaching the level I have set myself for at the end of 2022. However, I am far away from reaching the level I have set for myself Just a grammar mistake
However, I am still far away from reaching the level I I'm still a long way from reaching my target level by the end of 2022.
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For this, I have to make sure to constantly fulfill the task I’ve set for myself every day.
I would combine this sentence with the last one because they are short and closely related
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Subsequently, I want to describe the tasks I am doing every day in order to set myself up for a better level of English. Subsequently, I want to describe the tasks I am doing every day in order to Subsequently is quite rare.
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In my daily life, I am often not able to communicate without describing the proper vocabulary, which I can't come up with in proper time, therefore I am reading for half an hour books which I bought on my e-reader. In my daily life, I am often not able to communicate without describing the proper vocabulary, which I can't come up with in You don't need to have proper before time
Making a contraction to form(I'm) and switching the last part of the sentence around because it's easier to understand if you say the verb before describing with adjectives. In my daily life, I am often not able to communicate without having to describ In real time/on the spot
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While I like reading books in the old fashion, I have to admit that the newer technology has its own benefits. While I like reading Saying (in the old fashion) is not something anyone often says
You don't have to include (the) before newer technology While I like reading books has it's own benefits/has a lot to offer
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When I find new vocabulary which I do not understand I translate it by holding my finger on the word I don't know the translation of. When I find new vocabulary which I do not understand, I translate it by holding my finger on the word I don't know |
Afterward, when I assess that they are important enough, I write them down into an app that helps me to learn them. Afterwards, learn them/memorise them
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Furthermore I watch my series and movies in English, as this will also help to improve my hearing-comprehension.
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Another part at which I lack tremendously is the topic of writing. Another Using (where) instead is more fluid and referring to writing as a skill is more accurate
Another Writing is another thing I struggle with.
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I feel like I am not able to express myself on paper to an certain level which I am aiming for. I feel like I am not able to express myself on paper to a You only use (an) before a word that starts with vowel but you use (a) before a word that starts with a consonant.
It feels like I |
Therefore I am writing as often as I can to you guys, as this is helping me to practice the language and also my grammar. Therefore I Therefore is also quite rare. 'I've decided' works here.
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Unfortunately, I often do mistakes but you guys help me to an insane amount to get better. Unfortunately, I often People say (make mistakes) instead of (do mistakes)
Unfortunately, I often |
Writing down the mistakes you guys found and repeating them helps me to improve my grammar as well. |
Therefore I am very grateful to have found this website. |
Last but not least I have to do my homework and comprehend the sessions with my lecturer as well. Last but not least I have to do my homework and |
I do enjoy the sessions but I would prefer to have them at the university instead of online. I do enjoy the sessions but I would prefer to have them at the university instead of online. Sessions = Classes? Lectures? Tutorials?
at the university - in person |
Recently I realized that I need to practise my tenses aswell. Recently I realized that I need to practi Just a spelling mistake for the word (practice)
Recently I realized that I need to practise my tenses as well. realized = USA
realised = UK Recently I realised that I need to work on my grammatical tenses. |
As I haven’t found enough exercises based on an certain level I ordered an exam book.
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I hope it’s not too late, as the exams are starting very soon. I hope it’s not too late |
To conclude this I have to say that while admitting that I have big gaps in my usage of this language, I am confident to fill these in the next semesters.
throughout the coming semesters.
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I have found tons of motivation which also helps at the long distance. I have found tons of motivation which also helps at You don't need to use (the) before long distance.
I have recently found tons of motivation which |
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