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SummerTeaWater

July 3, 2021

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My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

I am a programmer, so I always use a computer in my office, even in my home.

I bought one more computer for experiencing the Apple environment.

It is totally different experiences between Window OS and Mack OS, but it is very interesting.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough place to store books in my room.

For this reason, I am reading e-books rather than paper books these days.

On the corner of my room, there is a shelve which has tea pots and many teas which I love to drink.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I can reduce my stress when drinking it.

All of those items make me feel happy and relax.

So I love my room very much.

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My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

I am a programmer, so I'm always usenear a computer in my, whether at the office, even or in my home.

I bought one moreanother computer forto experiencinge the Apple environmentcosystem.

It is totally different experiences between Window OS and Mack OS, but are very different so it is very interesting to use both.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough place to store booksall of them in my room.

For this reason, I am readingprefer e-books rathover than paper books these days.

OIn the corner of my room, there is a shelve which hasf for tea pots and the many teas which I love to drink.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I can. It reduces my stress when I drinking it.

All of thoese items make me feel happy and relax.

So I love my room very much.

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SummerTeaWater

July 4, 2021

402

Thank you very much!

My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

I am a programmer, so I always use a computer in my office, even and in my home.

You're not incorrect, but this sounds more natural

I bought one moreanother computer for experiencing the Apple environmentso that I can know what the Apple experience is like.

This doesn't sound quite right, but I think this is what you mean.

It is a totally different experiences between from that of the Window OS andor the Mack OS, but it is very interesting.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough splace to store all of my books in my room.

For this reason, I am reading e-books rather than paper books these days.

OIn the corner of my room, there is a shelvef which has tea pots and many teas which I love to drink.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I canit helps me to reduce my stress when drinking it.

Feedback

You might be interested in William Morris. He once said “Have nothing in your houses that you do not know to be useful or believe to be beautiful.”

https://aestheticamagazine.com/changing-philosophies/

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SummerTeaWater

July 3, 2021

402

Thanks for recommending.

My room

There are two computers and many books in my room.

I am a programmer, so I always use a computer in my office, even in my home.

I am a programmer, so I always use a computer in my office, even and in my home.

I am a programmer, so I'm always usenear a computer in my, whether at the office, even or in my home.

I bought one more computer for experiencing the Apple environment.

I bought one moreanother computer for experiencing the Apple environmentso that I can know what the Apple experience is like.

I bought one moreanother computer forto experiencinge the Apple environmentcosystem.

It is totally different experiences between Window OS and Mack OS, but it is very interesting.

It is a totally different experiences between from that of the Window OS andor the Mack OS, but it is very interesting.

It is totally different experiences between Window OS and Mack OS, but are very different so it is very interesting to use both.

On the left side of my computer desk, there is a five-tier bookshelf which has many books.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough place to store books in my room.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough splace to store all of my books in my room.

I read more than one hundred books a year, so there is not enough place to store booksall of them in my room.

For this reason, I am reading e-books rather than paper books these days.

For this reason, I am readingprefer e-books rathover than paper books these days.

On the corner of my room, there is a shelve which has tea pots and many teas which I love to drink.

OIn the corner of my room, there is a shelvef which has tea pots and many teas which I love to drink.

OIn the corner of my room, there is a shelve which hasf for tea pots and the many teas which I love to drink.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I can reduce my stress when drinking it.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I canit helps me to reduce my stress when drinking it.

Drinking tea is one of my favorite hobbies and I can. It reduces my stress when I drinking it.

All of those items make me feel happy and relax.

All of thoese items make me feel happy and relax.

So I love my room very much.

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