Jan. 20, 2023
My Life in SZ (3)
It's a simple job to be sitting beside the line, you can be a good worker unless you are determined to turn to be a robot. Unfortunately, I was not that kind of person.
One day, when I was working as usual. A colleague beside me warned me, "Don't be sleepy anymore, the boss's son is coming to visit the workshop, and he will bring some of his classmates to see this factory. " "Oh, I didn't sleep well last because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice. Speaking can arouse and clear my mind.
About one hour passed. A hand touched me saying, "Hey, hey, how are you? " “Oh, sorry” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered to the "greeting". A handsome teenager with sparking clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four other peers staring at me too. I could feel his smile was full of sympathy, the eyes of his classmates filled with pity. I adjusted my following glasses and continued to work. No one blamed me afterward because everyone know it was normal for a newcomer.
We had one hour free from 12:00 to one o'clock including lunch and rest. From the workshop to the canteen would spend 5 minutes, canteen to the dormitory 10 minutes. It would cost me 30 minutes to work on time in the afternoon. Nearly all of the employees finished their lunch in 5 minutes. I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often lean a box in the workshop to take a 10 minutes nap.
The most terrible recollection feeling was the dormitory in the Worker House.
My Life in SZ (3)
It's a simple job to be sitting beside the line, y. You can be a good worker unlessif you are determined to turn into be a robot.
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Unfortunately, I was not that kind of person.
One day, when I was working as usual.
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AOne day, when I was working as usual, a colleague beside me warned me, "Don't be sleepy any more, because the boss's son is coming to visit the workshop, and he will bris bringing some of his classmates to see this factory. "
"Oh, I didn't sleep well last night because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice.
Speaking can arouse and clear my mind.
About one hour passed.
A hand touched me saying, "Hey, hey, how are you? "
“Oh, sorry.” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered to the "greeting"."
A handsome teenager with sparkling clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four otherf his peers staringed at me too.
I could feel his smile was full of sympathy, while the eyes of his classmates were filled with pity.
I adjusted my following glasses and continued to work.
No one blamed me afterward because everyone knoew it was normal for a newcomer.
We had one hour free from 12:00 to one o'clock including lunch and rest.
From the workshop to the canteen would spend 5 minutes, , it was 5 minutes. From the canteen to the dormitory, it was 10 minutes.
It would cost me 30 minutes to work on time in the afternoon.
Nearly all of the employees finished their lunch in 5 minutes.
I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often leaned on a box in the workshop to take a 10 minutes nap.
TheMy most terrible recollection feeling waswas how the dormitory felt in the Worker House.
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Jan. 24, 2023
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It's a simple job to be sittingsit beside the line, you can be a good worker unlesseven if you aren't determined to turn into be a robot.
Unfortunately, I was not that kind of person.
One day, when I was working as usual.,
Aa colleague beside me warned me, "Don't be sleepy anymore, the boss's son is coming to visit the workshop, and he will bring some of his classmates to see thise factory. "
This sentence should continue from the previous one
"Oh, I didn't sleep well last night because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice.
Speaking can arouse and clear my mind.
About one hour passed.
A hand touched me saying, "Hey, hey, how are you? "
“Oh, sorry” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered to the "greeting".
A handsome teenager with sparkling clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four otherf his peers were staring at me too.
I could feel his smile was full of sympathy, while the eyes of his classmates were filled with pity.
I adjusted my following glasses and continued to work.
No one blamed me afterward because everyone knoew it was normal for a newcomer.
We had one hour free from 12:00 to one o'clock1:00 including lunch and rest.
Either write both with letters or both with numbers, but not one of each.
FGoing from the workshop to the canteen would spendtake 5 minutes, and from the canteen to the dormitory 10 minutes.
It would costtake me 30 minutes to get to work on time in the afternoon.
Nearly all of the other employees finished their lunch in 5 minutes.
I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often leant a box in the workshop to take a 10 minutes nap.
The most terrible recollection feelingmemory was the dormitory in the Worker House.
Jan. 24, 2023
Thank you so much for correcting this entry!
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It's a simple job to be sitting beside the line, you can be a good worker unless you are determined to turn to be a robot. It's a simple job to It's a simple job to be sitting beside the line "unless" means the opposite.
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One day, when I was working as usual. One day, when I was working as usual
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A colleague beside me warned me, "Don't be sleepy anymore, the boss's son is coming to visit the workshop, and he will bring some of his classmates to see this factory. "
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"Oh, I didn't sleep well last because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice. "Oh, I didn't sleep well last night because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice. "Oh, I didn't sleep well last night because two roommates came back to the dormitory after the night shift at 3 o'clock in the morning," I replied to her in a low voice. |
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Speaking can arouse and clear my mind. |
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About one hour passed. |
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A hand touched me saying, "Hey, hey, how are you? " A hand touched me saying, "Hey, hey, how are you? |
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“Oh, sorry” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered to the "greeting". “Oh, sorry” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered “Oh, sorry.” I immediately woke up and involuntarily answered to the "greeting |
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A handsome teenager with sparking clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four other peers staring at me too. A handsome teenager with sparkling clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four o A handsome teenager with sparkling clean leisure clothes was standing beside me with a smile while four o |
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I could feel his smile was full of sympathy, the eyes of his classmates filled with pity. I could feel his smile was full of sympathy I could feel his smile was full of sympathy |
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I adjusted my following glasses and continued to work. I adjusted my I adjusted my |
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No one blamed me afterward because everyone know it was normal for a newcomer. No one blamed me afterward because everyone kn No one blamed me afterward because everyone kn |
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We had one hour free from 12:00 to one o'clock including lunch and rest. We had one hour free from 12:00 to Either write both with letters or both with numbers, but not one of each.
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From the workshop to the canteen would spend 5 minutes, canteen to the dormitory 10 minutes.
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It would cost me 30 minutes to work on time in the afternoon. It would |
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Nearly all of the employees finished their lunch in 5 minutes. Nearly all of the other employees finished their lunch in 5 minutes. |
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I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often lean a box in the workshop to take a 10 minutes nap. I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often leant a box in the workshop to take a 10 minute I had no time to sleep in a bed, so I often leaned on a box in the workshop to take a 10 minute |
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The most terrible recollection feeling was the dormitory in the Worker House. The most terrible
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