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ozymandias99

Aug. 27, 2022

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My language journey

I feel like I am repeating myself too much with formal texts, so let's try something a little bit more informal now.

I have always being in love with learning. That's the reason why I keep pushing me forward. I was born in Colombia, therefore, I am a native spanish speaker. Nevertheless, I know a little bit of english and not so much of french. The next(current) challenge: german.

At elementary school was where my language journey began. I wish I had studied at a bilingual school, as I wouldn't have to learn almost everything by myself. Even though I have been learning english for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker. I have yet a lot to learn. To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill. Had I done this type of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hard right now. Well, at the end of the day, it doesn't matter. I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn french. Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tongue was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France. As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of french and I recently approved the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in french are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn german. There are a lot of good universities in Germany and Switzerland. Thus, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tongue. This summer I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens and Präteritum. Hopefully, I can keep up with this learning pace. Wish me luck.

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My lLanguage jJourney

I feel likeas if I am repeating myself too much with formal texts, so let's try something a little bit more informal now.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

yay!

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

I was born in Colombia, therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of eEnglish and not aso much of fFrench.

The next (current) challenge: gGerman.

Ich kenne auch deutsch.

At elementary school was where my language journey began.

I wish I had studied at a bilingual school, as I wouldn't have to learn almost everything by myself.

Even though I have been learning eEnglish for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

English is hard.

I have yet a lot to learn.

To be honest, I am writing these textessays because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill.

Had I done thisese types of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hard right now.

plural-plural

Well, at the end of the day, it doesn't matter.

I definitely considerbelieve that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tolanguage was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France at the time.

As time passed by, I reached athe B2 level of fFrench and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn ging German.

There are a lot of good universities in Germany and Switzerland.

Thus, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tolanguage.

This summer I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens and Präteritum.

Hopefully, I can keep up with this learning pace.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

Nice work and best of luck!

My language journey

I feel like I am repeating myself too much with formal texts, so let's try something a little bit more informal now.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

That's the reason why I keep pushing me forward.

I was born in Colombia, t. Therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of eEnglish and not so much of fFrench.

The next(current) challenge: gGerman.

At elementary school was where mMy language journey began in elementary school.

I wish I had studied at a bilingual school, as I wouldn't have to learn almost everything by myself.

Even though I have been learning eEnglish for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

I have yet a lot yet to learn.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing isto be my weakest communication skill.

Had I done this type of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hard right now.

Well, at the end of the day, it doesn't matter.

I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't iright?

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tongue was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France.

Your sentence is correct, but usually we just say "language" instead of "tongue". I feel like "tongue" generally sounds more formal or poetic.
There is also the phrase "mother tongue", but I think a lot of people would just say "native language" instead.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of fFrench and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn ging German.

There are a lot of good universities in Germany and Switzerland.

Thus, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tongue.

This summer I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens and Präteritum.

Hopefully, I can keep up with this learning pace.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

I think you're already really good at writing in English! Good luck with your German studies!

My language journey

I feel like I am repeating myself too much with formal texts, so let's try something a little bit more informal now.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

I was born in Colombia, therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of english, and not so much of fa little French.

This fits better :)

The next (current) challenge: gGerman.

Even though I have been learning english for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

I have yet a lot to learn.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill.

Had I done this type of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hard right now.

Well, at the end of the day, it doesn't matter.

I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tongue, was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of fFrench, and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learning german.

There are a lot of good universities in Germany and Switzerland.

Thus, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tongue.

This summer I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens, and Präteritum.

Hopefully, I can keep up with this learning pace.

Wish me luck.

Feedback

Well done, und viel Glück!

My lLanguage jJourney

I have always being(loved/been in love with) learning.

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

I was born in Colombia, t. Therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of eEnglish and not so much of fFrench.

The next( (and current) challenge: g is German.

At elementary school was where mMy language journey began in elementary school.

Even though I have been learning eEnglish for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

I have yet a loso much yet to learn.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing isto be my weakest communication skill.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of fFrench and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn gGerman.

This summer, I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens and Präteritum.

Feedback

Solid entry. Just minor grammar corrections. Good luck with the learning!!

I have always beingen in love with learning.

‘been’ instead of ‘being’

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

‘myself’ is the correct pronoun here

At elementary school was where mMy language journey began in elementary school.

It feels more natural. An alternative way of saying it would be ‘Elementary school was where my language journey began’, removing the ‘at’.

I wish I had studied at a bilingual school, as I wouldn't have had to learn almost everything by myself.

as ‘had’ was used for studying, i changed ‘wouldn’t have’ to ‘wouldn’t have had’ so the tenses would match.

Even Although I have been learning english for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingualfluent speaker.

‘Although’ sounds more natural but ‘even though’ still works. I would say ‘fluent speaker’ but ‘bilingual speaker’ is still easy to understand.

I still have yet a lot to learn.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill.

The extra words are unnecessary

Had I done this type of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hardas difficult right now.

I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?.

I would just remove ‘isn’t it’ from the sentence, it sounds awkward and unnecessary.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of french and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in french are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

depending whether you successfully completed them, it would be ‘passed’ or ‘took’.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learning german.

changed the tense of ‘learn’

Thuserefore, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tongue.

‘Thus’ is a bit outdated and rarely used. ‘Therefore’ makes more sense

Feedback

really good writing and even where there was mistakes, still easy to understand so well done!

My language journey

My lLanguage jJourney

My lLanguage jJourney

I feel like I am repeating myself too much with formal texts, so let's try something a little bit more informal now.

I feel likeas if I am repeating myself too much with formal texts, so let's try something a little bit more informal now.

I have always being in love with learning.

I have always being(loved/been in love with) learning.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

I have always beingen in love with learning.

That's the reason why I keep pushing me forward.

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

That's the reason why I keep pushing me forward.

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

That's the reason why I keep pushing meyself forward.

I was born in Colombia, therefore, I am a native spanish speaker.

I was born in Colombia, t. Therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

I was born in Colombia, t. Therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

I was born in Colombia, therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

I was born in Colombia, therefore, I am a native sSpanish speaker.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of english and not so much of french.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of eEnglish and not so much of fFrench.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of eEnglish and not so much of fFrench.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of english, and not so much of fa little French.

Nevertheless, I know a little bit of eEnglish and not aso much of fFrench.

The next(current) challenge: german.

The next( (and current) challenge: g is German.

The next(current) challenge: gGerman.

The next (current) challenge: gGerman.

The next (current) challenge: gGerman.

I first started learning when I was at elementary school.

I wish I had studied at a bilingual school, as I wouldn't have to learn almost everything by myself.

I wish I had studied at a bilingual school, as I wouldn't have had to learn almost everything by myself.

Even though I have been learning english for a considerble amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

I have yet a lot to learn.

I have yet a lot yet to learn.

I have yet a loso much yet to learn.

I have yet a lot to learn.

I still have yet a lot to learn.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing isto be my weakest communication skill.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing isto be my weakest communication skill.

To be honest, I am writing these texts because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill.

To be honest, I am writing these textessays because I consider that writing is my weakest communication skill.

Had I done this type of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hard right now.

Had I done this type of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hardas difficult right now.

Had I done thisese types of writing exercises earlier in my life, then it wouldn't be that hard right now.

Well, at the end of the day, it doesn't matter.

I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?

I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't iright?

I definitely consider that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?.

I definitely considerbelieve that when the going gets tough, the tough gets going, isn't it?.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn french.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

When I was 18 years old, I started to learn fFrench.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tongue was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tongue was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tongue, was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France.

Basically, the main reason why I started learning this beautiful tolanguage was because I wanted to visit my sister who lived in France at the time.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of french and I recently approved the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in french are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of fFrench and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of fFrench and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of fFrench, and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As time passed by, I reached a B2 level of french and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in french are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As time passed by, I reached athe B2 level of fFrench and I recently approvpassed the DELF B2 exam, which was somewhat difficult since my listening skills in fFrench are not up to par with my other communication abilities.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn german.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn gGerman.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn ging German.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learning german.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learning german.

As my language learning journey continues, I am looking forward to learn ging German.

There are a lot of good universities in Germany and Switzerland.

Thus, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tongue.

Thuserefore, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tongue.

Thus, it's definitely worth learning this incredible tolanguage.

This summer I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens and Präteritum.

This summer, I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens and Präteritum.

This summer I learned a few simple structures such as Perfekt, Präsens, and Präteritum.

Hopefully, I can keep up with this learning pace.

Wish me luck.

At elementary school was where my language journey began.

At elementary school was where mMy language journey began in elementary school.

At elementary school was where mMy language journey began in elementary school.

At elementary school was where mMy language journey began in elementary school.

Even though I have been learning english for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

Even though I have been learning eEnglish for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

Even though I have been learning eEnglish for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

Even Although I have been learning english for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingualfluent speaker.

Even though I have been learning eEnglish for a considerable amount of time, I am by no means a bilingual speaker.

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