Jan. 14, 2023
Report: My first week in Düsseldorf (Germany)
My first week in Düsseldorf (Germany)
As starting point, I am glad to Seville University for this opportunity. Although it was just one week, it was enough time to get to know more about the country, beyond the topics I have ever heard about.
My stay was much easier thanks to Gloria, the previous student who enjoyed the benefits of this programme. Most of the places we visited were alongside the Rin river, where the main part of clubs, bars and discos are located on. I was fascinated how easy was for me, a not much outgoing person, to meet new people from different nationatilities over there. During my stay I spent my time mainly with a group of young au pairs, who show me a gastronomical route in this area. It was amazing the variety of local plates you can find, since my general idea about German food didn’t go far away from sausaches and spicy sauces. Apart from that I could taste a good variety of beers (nothing to do with the Spanish ones).
Moreover, Gloria recommended me a good climb gym, which fit perfectly for me to reduce all calories from the activities described above. I knew about German climbers fame, but I couldn’t imagine how many gyms you found here.
After my exchange in Germany and having talked with Gloria, I may say that ours experiences were pretty similar each other, mainly due to all the outgoing environment is focused along the river. In fact, she already knew the au pair group I mentioned above.
As an overview of the programme, it was an unforgettable experience that I strongly recommend to any students who wish a first approach of what they can feel staying abroad, not only because improving your English skills but for opening your mind, especially in a multicultural city as Düsseldorf.
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Although it was just one week, it was enough time to get to know more about the country, beyond the topics I have ever heard aboutabout which I had only heard.
My stay was much easier thanks to Gloria, the previous student who enjoyed the benefits of this programme.
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I was fascinated with how easy it was for me, a not muchvery outgoing person, to meet new people from different nationatilities over there.
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April 23, 2023
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My first week in Düsseldorf (Germany) |
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My first week in Düsseldorf (Germany)
This is already stated in the title.
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As starting point, I am glad to Seville University for this opportunity.
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Although it was just one week, it was enough time to get to know more about the country, beyond the topics I have ever heard about. Although it was just one week, it was enough time to get to know more about the country |
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My stay was much easier thanks to Gloria, the previous student who enjoyed the benefits of this programme. |
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Most of the places we visited were alongside the Rin river, where the main part of clubs, bars and discos are located on. Most of the places we visited were alongside the Rhin |
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I was fascinated how easy was for me, a not much outgoing person, to meet new people from different nationatilities over there. I was fascinated with how easy it was for me, a not |
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During my stay I spent my time mainly with a group of young au pairs, who show me a gastronomical route in this area. During my stay I spent my time mainly with a group of young au pairs, who showed me a gastronomical route in this area. |
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It was amazing the variety of local plates you can find, since my general idea about German food didn’t go far away from sausaches and spicy sauces. It was amazing |
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Apart from that I could taste a good variety of beers (nothing to do with the Spanish ones). Apart from that I could taste a good variety of beers (which had nothing to do with |
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Moreover, Gloria recommended me a good climb gym, which fit perfectly for me to reduce all calories from the activities described above. Moreover, Gloria recommended |
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I knew about German climbers fame, but I couldn’t imagine how many gyms you found here. I knew about the fame of German climbers |
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After my exchange in Germany and having talked with Gloria, I may say that ours experiences were pretty similar each other, mainly due to all the outgoing environment is focused along the river. After my exchange in Germany and having talked with Gloria, I m |
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In fact, she already knew the au pair group I mentioned above. In fact, she already knew the au pair group I mentioned You had already used "above" so I replaced this with the synonym "earlier."
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As an overview of the programme, it was an unforgettable experience that I strongly recommend to any students who wish a first approach of what they can feel staying abroad, not only because improving your English skills but for opening your mind, especially in a multicultural city as Düsseldorf. As an overview of the program In the US, we spell it as "program."
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Report: My first week in Düsseldorf (Germany) Report: My We capitalize the first letter of important works in titles.
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