Dec. 7, 2021
My favorite winter-related movie
The only movie I know, that has a winter scene in it, is Frozen. As you can tell, I don't have much choices to select because I don't often watch movies. But if someone already turned on the TV with a movie, then I will watch it. In other words, I don't actively search for movies to watch. I'm getting distracted now.
Part 1: Retelling the movie from my mind which just mean I won't google search any information relating to Frozen for this first part
Onto the main topic 'the movie', *SPOILER ALERT*, Elsa, the ice girl, for some reason, decided to leave her home. And she all so accidentally froze the whole kingdom. And then, Anna, Elsa's younger sister, went on a journey to bring her sister back and save the kingdom.
But no one wants to help her so Anna has to go along with her trusty horse, not that trusty because it abandoned her midway in the middle of the forest. And because the outside was so chilly thanks to the ice girl, Else, Anna had to find a shelter. It was at this moment that Anna saw a shop where she met Hans, a prospective spouse.
This is taking too long, I'm gonna end it here and say that Anna and Hans passed all the tests and trials, successfully got Elsa back home, and unfroze the kingdom. And Anna and Hans live happily ever after.
Side note, at first, I was planning to make a part 2 where I would do some research to fill in the gap but telling the story is taking longer than I have expected. So sorry for cutting it off so suddenly :))
<p>I put quotation around 'the movie' instead of comma because I think it's an important information.</p>
<p>I used the word 'prospective spouse' but what I really want to say is a person who she will marry at the end of the movie. I think the word 'prospective spouse' mean a spouse who is fortune-telled by a fortune-teller so it doesn't really fit the description of 100% going to become a spouse. Any better word idea?</p>
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The only movie I know, that has a winter scene in it, is Frozen.
As you can tell, I don't have muchany choices to select because I don't often watch movies.
In general (though English is full of exceptions of course) Use the word many for quantifiable items (I.e. how many options do you have? 3, 4, several, many) and use much for things that don’t have a countable quantity (how much do you like skiing? A lot!)
But if someone already turned on the TV withand a movie was on, then I willould watch it.
Alternative tense option: “But if someone TURNS on the TV and a movie IS on, then I WILL watch it”)
Part 1: Retelling the movie from my mind which just means I won't google search any information relating to Frozen for this first part
Onto the main topic 'the movie', *SPOILER ALERT*, Elsa, the ice girl, for some reason, decided to leave her home.
And sShe all so accidentally froze the whole kingdom.
But no one wants to help her so Anna has to go along with her trusty horse, (not that trusty because it abandoned her midway in the middle of the forest.)
Dec. 9, 2021
Onto the main topic 'the movie', *SPOILER ALERT*, Elsa, the ice girl, for some reason, decided to leave her home.
Why did you get rid of the comma after the word 'for some reason'? I couldn't find any online resources talk about this. Help me :))
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My favorite winter-related movie |
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The only movie I know, that has a winter scene in it, is Frozen. The only movie I know |
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As you can tell, I don't have much choices to select because I don't often watch movies. As you can tell, I don't have m In general (though English is full of exceptions of course) Use the word many for quantifiable items (I.e. how many options do you have? 3, 4, several, many) and use much for things that don’t have a countable quantity (how much do you like skiing? A lot!)
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But if someone already turned on the TV with a movie, then I will watch it. But if someone Alternative tense option: “But if someone TURNS on the TV and a movie IS on, then I WILL watch it”)
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In other words, I don't actively search for movies to watch. |
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I'm getting distracted now. |
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Part 1: Retelling the movie from my mind which just mean I won't google search any information relating to Frozen for this first part Part 1: Retelling the movie from my mind which just means I won't google search any information relating to Frozen for this first part |
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Onto the main topic 'the movie', *SPOILER ALERT*, Elsa, the ice girl, for some reason, decided to leave her home. Onto the main topic 'the movie', *SPOILER ALERT*, Elsa, the ice girl, for some reason |
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And she all so accidentally froze the whole kingdom.
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And then, Anna, Elsa's younger sister, went on a journey to bring her sister back and save the kingdom. |
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But no one wants to help her so Anna has to go along with her trusty horse, not that trusty because it abandoned her midway in the middle of the forest. But no one wants to help her so Anna has to go along with her trusty horse |
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And because the outside was so chilly thanks to the ice girl, Else, Anna had to find a shelter. |
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It was at this moment that Anna saw a shop where she met Hans, a prospective spouse. |
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This is taking too long, I'm gonna end it here and say that Anna and Hans passed all the tests and trials, successfully got Elsa back home, and unfroze the kingdom. |
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And Anna and Hans live happily ever after. |
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Side note, at first, I was planning to make a part 2 where I would do some research to fill in the gap but telling the story is taking longer than I have expected. |
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So sorry for cutting it off so suddenly :)) |
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