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Ladia

April 10, 2021

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My Daily Routine

I'm not gonna keep this short. I usually get up after 10 am, and then my activities during the day differ a lot. Sometimes, I start working late in the afternoon, even though I'd like to start earlier. I spend most of my free time on the internet doing plenty of useless stuff.

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My Daily Routine

I'm not gonna keep this short.

Just so you know I've only ever heard 'I'm gonna keep this short' and never with 'not', I'd maybe say something like 'this will take awhile to describe/explain'

I usually get up after 10 am, and then my activities during the day differ a lot.

Sometimes, I start working late in the afternoon, even though I'd like to start earlier.

I spend most of my free time on the internet doing plenty of useless stuff.

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Slightly awkward first line, everything else is fine.

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Ladia

April 10, 2021

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I'm not gonna keep this short.

Just so you know I've only ever heard 'I'm gonna keep this short' and never with 'not', I'd maybe say something like 'this will take awhile to describe/explain'

Actually, the "not" wasn't meant to be there. It somehow slipped in there, haha

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Ladia

April 10, 2021

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Thank you!

My Daily Routine

I'm not gonna keep this short.

I'm not gonna keep this short.

I usually get up after 10 am, and then my activities during the day differ a lot.

Sometimes, I start working late in the afternoon, even though I'd like to start earlier.

I spend most of my free time on the internet doing plenty of useless stuff.

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