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Music on Rainy Days

It's raining all day today. I made a playlist named "rain," and I'm collecting songs I listen to on rainy days. The songs include rain in its title or lyrics, or I somehow thought the song was reminiscent of rain. Other than that, I have playlists for morning and night. They are BGMs for my life.

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Music on Rainy Days

It's raining all day today.

I made a playlist named "rain," and I'm collecting songs I listen to on rainy days.

The songs include rain in its title or lyrics, or I somehow thought the song was reminiscent of rain.

Other than that, I have playlists for morning and night.

They are BGMsbackground music for my life.

“They are background music for my life” would probably be better than using the acronym BGM. Also, the word “music” is uncountable, so if you were going to use the acronym it would be “they are BGM for my life”.

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ponta

Sept. 9, 2021

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I'm happy to hear that :)

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ponta

Sept. 9, 2021

217

Thank you for the corrections!

Music on Rainy Days

It's raining all day today.

I made a playlist named "rain," and I'm collecting songs I listen to on rainy days.

The songs include rain in its title or lyrics, or I somehow thought the song was reminiscent of rain.

Other than that, I have playlists for morning and night.

They are BGMs for my life.

They are BGMsbackground music for my life.

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