July 25, 2022
Morbius sweep
Quite the funny trend to take place this summer is the Morbius sweep. I'm not a Marvel fan myself, but I couldn't help but look for movie reviews for this high budget film that turned out to be an absolute disappointment. Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for cure to his disease. It recieved poor reviews for the incoherent plot and scene structure and bombed the box office. It was marketed to be the best movie of the summer, and it failed to be so. Twitter found this to be hilarious and several memes trended, such as "it's morbin' time". Sony, the company who made Morbius, mistook the trending memes, which were about the lack of cinema attendance and the dislike of those who did attend, as positive feedback and re-released it in theaters- only for it to fail in bringing in viewers again. This shows the power of social media in dictating film success in a way. As well as showing what not to do as in a marketing plan.
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I'm not a Marvel fan myself, but I couldn't help but look for movie reviews for this high budget film that turned out to be an absolute disappointment.
Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for a cure to his disease.
It recieived poor reviews for the incoherent plot and scene structure and bombed at the box office.
It was marketed to be the best movie of the summer, and but it failed to be so.
Twitter found this to be hilarious and several memes trended, such as "it's morbin' time".
Sony, the company who made Morbius, mistook the trending memes, which were about the lack of cinema attendance and the dislike of those who did attend, as positive feedback and re-released it in theaters- only for it to fail again in bringing in viewers again.
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As well as showing what not to do as in a marketing plan.
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Morbius sweep
Quite the funny trend to take place this summer is the Morbius sweep.
While this isn't wrong, to me, it doesn't flow. Instead, I would say something like "A funny trend of this summer is..." or "One of this summer's funniest trends is..."
I'm not a Marvel fan myself, but I couldn't help but look for movie reviews for this high budget film that turned out to be an absolute disappointment.
Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for a cure to his disease.
It recieived poor reviews for the incoherent plot and scene structure and, causing it to bombed at the box office.
It was marketed to be the best movie of the summer, and it failed to be so.
Twitter found this to be hilarious and several memes trended, such as "it's morbin' time".
Sony, the company who made Morbius, mistook the trending memes, which were about the lack of cinema attendance and the dislike of those who did attend, as positive feedback and re-released it in theaters- only for it to fail into bringing in viewers again.
TIn a way, this shows the power of social media in dictating film success in a way.
Clearer when "in a way placed at the beginning of the sentence
As well as showing what not to do as in a marketing plan.
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Very impressive! You use some complicated vocabulary and grammar.
Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for a cure to his disease.
As well as showing what not to do as in a marketing plan.
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Morbius sweep Morbius We usually capitalize the first letter of important words in a title.
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Quite the funny trend to take place this summer is the Morbius sweep. Quite the funny trend to take place this summer is the Morbius sweep. While this isn't wrong, to me, it doesn't flow. Instead, I would say something like "A funny trend of this summer is..." or "One of this summer's funniest trends is..."
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I'm not a Marvel fan myself, but I couldn't help but look for movie reviews for this high budget film that turned out to be an absolute disappointment. |
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Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for cure to his disease. Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for a cure to his disease. Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease, and spends his time searching for a cure to his disease. Morbius is essentially a doctor with a blood disease |
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It recieved poor reviews for the incoherent plot and scene structure and bombed the box office. It rec It rec |
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It was marketed to be the best movie of the summer, and it failed to be so. It was marketed to be the best movie of the summer |
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Twitter found this to be hilarious and several memes trended, such as "it's morbin' time". |
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Sony, the company who made Morbius, mistook the trending memes, which were about the lack of cinema attendance and the dislike of those who did attend, as positive feedback and re-released it in theaters- only for it to fail in bringing in viewers again. Sony, the company who made Morbius, mistook the trending memes, which were about the lack of cinema attendance and the dislike of those who did attend, as positive feedback and re-released it in theaters- only for it to fail Sony, the company who made Morbius, mistook the trending memes, which were about the lack of cinema attendance and the dislike of those who did attend, as positive feedback and re-released it in theaters- only for it to fail again in bringing in viewers |
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This shows the power of social media in dictating film success in a way.
Clearer when "in a way placed at the beginning of the sentence
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As well as showing what not to do as in a marketing plan. As well as showing what not to do As well as showing what not to do
This is a sentence fragment so I added it to the previous sentence.
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