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kaaren

Aug. 19, 2022

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Mon Anniversaire

Oui, on a trouvé un nouveau restaurant pour fêter mon anniversaire. On est allé déjeuner. J'ai eu un morceau de poisson; il est mervellieux. Aussi on a eu une bouteille de vin blanc. J'ai essayé manger un beau dessert, mais j'etais trop plein. C'etait un jour trés génial.


Should I say On est allé à ... or ... pour déjeuner? I am confused as to why sometimes you need a preposition and sometimes you don't.

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Mon Aanniversaire

It's unusual to capitalize every word of a title in French

Oui, on a trouvé un nouveau restaurant pour fêter mon anniversaire.

On est allés (y) déjeuner.

When "on" is basically a synonym of "we" (representing a tangible group), adjectives have a plural agreement

Y = there, at this restaurant

J'ai eupris un morceau de poisson ; il esétait merveillieux.

"j'ai eu" would emphasize it was given to you. This is what children say about the school mess for instance ("aujourd'hui on a eu du poisson"), but about a restaurant where you're free to pick your food, it sounds awkward

Aussi on a euOn a aussi pris une bouteille de vin blanc.

J'ai essayé de manger un beau dessert, mais j'etais trop pleine n'en pouvais vraiment plus/j'étais vraiment repue.

Essayer DE faire qqch
"Plein" would be understandable but a bit colloquial. I suggested neutral alternatives

C'eétait une jour trésnée vraiment géniale.

Adjectives that already express a high degree of something (horrible, génial, magnifique etc) almost always require "vraiment", not "très". You can see it this way:
Génial = très bien
Vraiment génial = vraiment très bien

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kaaren

Aug. 20, 2022

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On est allés (y) déjeuner.

When "on" is basically a synonym of "we" (representing a tangible group), adjectives have a plural agreement

Y = there, at this restaurant

Thank you! Very helpful notes.

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kaaren

Aug. 20, 2022

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J'ai eupris un morceau de poisson ; il esétait merveillieux.

"j'ai eu" would emphasize it was given to you. This is what children say about the school mess for instance ("aujourd'hui on a eu du poisson"), but about a restaurant where you're free to pick your food, it sounds awkward

Thank you. I never understood why French speakers say "J'ai pris" instead of "J'ai eu" -- now I get it. Very helpful! I do have a question regarding the use of "es" vs "était" in this instance: if the fact that the fish was marvelous is over and done with, why does one use the imparfait? I appreciate your speedy help.

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kaaren

Aug. 20, 2022

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J'ai essayé de manger un beau dessert, mais j'etais trop pleine n'en pouvais vraiment plus/j'étais vraiment repue.

Essayer DE faire qqch
"Plein" would be understandable but a bit colloquial. I suggested neutral alternatives

Would the word "repue" be used in everyday French? In English, if we said we were "sated" it would sound a bit over the top, or exaggerated. Thanks.

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Monsieur_Elephant

Aug. 21, 2022

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1) Because you rather insist on a description, a state of being here. If a neighborhood's kid helps you with whatever task and you tell his mother, you may say "il A ÉTÉ merveilleux/adorable", emphasizing the consequences of what he's done.

3) Honestly in spoken French, the most natural alternative wouldn't include an adjective. "J'(en) peux plus" or "je vais exploser" (a bit more colloquial) come to mind. "Rassasié" is more common than "repu" also (didn't think about it the first time)

However, as a general rule, keep in mind registers in English and French never match exactly. Ex "I'm disappointed" is a perfectly neutral English phrase, but "je suis désappointé" sounds like you're a XVIIIth century writer. And still, both words are cognates, of course.

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kaaren

Aug. 21, 2022

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Merci Monsieur Elephant! Super helpful.

Mon Anniversaire

Mon Aanniversaire

Oui, on a trouvé un nouveau restaurant pour fêter mon anniversaire.

On est allé déjeuner.

On est allés (y) déjeuner.

J'ai eu un morceau de poisson; il est mervellieux.

J'ai eupris un morceau de poisson ; il esétait merveillieux.

Aussi on a eu une bouteille de vin blanc.

Aussi on a euOn a aussi pris une bouteille de vin blanc.

J'ai essayé manger un beau dessert, mais j'etais trop plein.

J'ai essayé de manger un beau dessert, mais j'etais trop pleine n'en pouvais vraiment plus/j'étais vraiment repue.

C'etait un jour trés génial.

C'eétait une jour trésnée vraiment géniale.

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