May 13, 2020
Mistakes
Today is the third day I write English. I made a lot of mistake from basic to advance, sometimes I bored because I always wrong and I was going to quit and stop write English. I nervours about my mistakes I always think people will taunt me. I shared my felling with my teacher who taught me at the college and he said, “Don’t worry about that, just keep going, do whatever you can and make a lot of mistakes as much as you can, if you wrong then fix it. Mistakes make you better”. That why I continue write this paragraph.
Hôm nay là ngày thứ ba tôi viết tiếng Anh. Tôi đã phạm rất nhiều sai lầm từ cơ bản đến khó khăn, đôi khi tôi chán vì tôi luôn sai và tôi sẽ bỏ việc và ngừng viết tiếng Anh. Tôi lo lắng về những sai lầm của mình, tôi luôn nghĩ mọi người sẽ chế nhạo tôi. Tôi đã chia sẻ câu chuyện này với thầy của mình, người đã dạy tôi ở trường đại học và anh thầy ấy nói, "Đừng quá lo lắng, cứ tiếp tục, làm bất cứ điều gì bạn có thể và phạm nhiều sai lầm nhất có thể, nếu bạn sai thì sửa. Những sai lầm khiến bạn trở nên tốt hơn." Đó là lý do tại sao tôi tiếp tục viết bài này.
Mistakes
Today is the third day I writehave written in English.
I made a lot of mistakes from basic to advance,d, and sometimes I get bored because I am always wrong and. I was going to quit and stop writeing English.
'Mistake' should be plural. 'Advance' is a basic verb while 'advanced' refers to the difficulty of something. 'I' must be followed by a verb; 'I am bored', 'I get bored', 'I am always wrong', 'I believe I am always wrong', etc. 'Quit' and 'stop' carry the same meaning, so you only need to use one of these words.
I am nervours about my mistakes. I always think people will taunt me.
I shared my felelings with my teacher who taught me at thein college and he said, “Don’t worry about that, just keep going, do whatever you can and m. Make a lot of mistakes as much as you can, i. If you're wrong, then fix it.'
'If you wrong' is grammatically incorrect. 'You're' in a contraction of 'you are'. AKA, 'If you are wrong'. 'You're' is easily confused with 'your', which is possessive, as in 'your dog' or 'your hat'.
"Mistakes make you better”."
That is why I continue to write this paragraph. Alternatively, 'That is why I continue to write English."
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I also find writing in another language intimidating. Good luck in your studies!
May 14, 2020
Thanks for your help.
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always think people will taunt me.
I shared my felelings with my teacher who taught me at the college and he said, “Don’t worry about that, just keep going, do whatever you can and make a lot of mistakes as much as you can, if you are wrong, then fix it.
That why I continue to write this paragraph.
May 14, 2020
Thanks for your help.
Today is the third day I wriote in English.
I made a lot of mistakes from basic to advance,d, and sometimes I felt bored because I was always wrong and. I was going to quit and stop writeing English.
I felt nervours about my mistakes. I always thinkought people willould taunt me.
When you describe your feelings, you can say, "I felt X" or "I was X." They mean the same thing.
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Mistakes make you better”.”
That why I continued and wriote this paragraph.
Feedback
I like your teacher's advice. I will try to follow it myself.
May 14, 2020
Yes, thank you very much.
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