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SummerTeaWater

April 22, 2022

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Learning From a Hard Work

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work different offices.

Because this presentation was for other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

For about six weeks, I learned a lot while preparing presentation materials.

Thanks for my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gave it to our presenter.

I could see different aspects of works in my company during preparing.

I should learn more for wider views.

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Learning From a Hard Work

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

Because this presentation was for other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

For about six weeks, I learned a lot while preparing presentation materials.

Thanks forto my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gaive it to our presenter.

I could see different aspects of works in my company during the preparingation.

I should learn more forto widern my views more.

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Good writing! :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 23, 2022

402

Thank you so much. :)

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

BecauseDue to the fact that this presentation was meant for other offices, so I facedI had to learn and get familiar with a lot of new terms to understand.

Thanks forto my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gaive it to our presenter/hand it over to our presenter.

I could seobserve different aspectways of worksing in my company during the preparingation phase.

I should learn more for widerto expand my world views.

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SummerTeaWater

April 24, 2022

402

Thank you.

Learning From a Hard Work

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

the preposition 'in' is needed here because 'office' is a place that you work IN

BecausSince this presentation was forabout other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

if you mention 'because' at the start of your sentence, you don't need to repeat 'so' !

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nice work! well written :)

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SummerTeaWater

April 23, 2022

402

Thank you very much.

Learning From a Hard Work

Learning From a Hard Work

Learning From a Hard Work

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work different offices.

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

I just finished a presentation with my co-workers who work in different offices.

Because this presentation was for other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

BecauseDue to the fact that this presentation was meant for other offices, so I facedI had to learn and get familiar with a lot of new terms to understand.

BecausSince this presentation was forabout other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

Because this presentation was for other offices, so I faced a lot of new terms to understand.

For about six weeks, I learned a lot while preparing presentation materials.

Thanks for my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gave it to our presenter.

Thanks forto my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gaive it to our presenter/hand it over to our presenter.

Thanks forto my co-workers, I could finally finish the presentation material and gaive it to our presenter.

I could see different aspects of works in my company during preparing.

I could seobserve different aspectways of worksing in my company during the preparingation phase.

I could see different aspects of works in my company during the preparingation.

I should learn more for wider views.

I should learn more for widerto expand my world views.

I should learn more forto widern my views more.

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