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June 23, 2022

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"La Nit de Sant Joan"

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers. In the last years we have a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real madness. Last weekend there was more of thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya. For this reason, many municipalities has banned the firecrackers, because is the cause of many fires. The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning influence in these fires too. On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

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This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

In the last years we haved a dilemma with this tradition forbecause of the very high number of fires in the woods, it iwas a real madness.

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

The high temperatures and lack ofinefficient forests cleaning influence in these fires too.

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Nice

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Ducky

June 27, 2022

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Thanks.

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June 29, 2022

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You're welcome

TOn this night the, people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

In the last few years, we have had a dilemma with this tradition forbecause of the very high number of fires in the woods, i. It is a real madness.

"In the last years" isn't exactly wrong, but "in the last few years" sounds more natural. Also, "It is reallly crazy" is a more colloquial and more commonly-used way to say "It is a real madness."

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

You use "firecrackers" (a plural noun) before the comma, so you have to use "they" to refer to the plural firecrackers after the comma

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleanings influence in these fires too.

On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, andso this night will be a real hell for them.

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Great job! English grammar is really tricky, but I could understand everything you wrote :)

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Ducky

June 27, 2022

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Thank you. I try to improve my English a little every day:)

"La Nit de Sant Joan"

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

TOn this night the, people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

In the last years we have a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real madness.

In the last few years, we have had a dilemma with this tradition forbecause of the very high number of fires in the woods, i. It is a real madness.

In the last years we haved a dilemma with this tradition forbecause of the very high number of fires in the woods, it iwas a real madness.

Last weekend there was more of thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

For this reason, many municipalities has banned the firecrackers, because is the cause of many fires.

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning influence in these fires too.

The high temperatures and lack ofinefficient forests cleaning influence in these fires too.

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleanings influence in these fires too.

On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, andso this night will be a real hell for them.

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