D
Ducky

Jun 23

English

1 min read

"La Nit de Sant Joan"

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers. In the last years we have a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real madness. Last weekend there was more of thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya. For this reason, many municipalities has banned the firecrackers, because is the cause of many fires. The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning influence in these fires too. On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

Corrections (2)

Format

a
alya 1.47
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
Overall feedback & comment
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
    Reply
Overall feedback & comment
Showing corrections grouped by sentence

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

TOn this night the, people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

Grammar

This night the people usually celebrate the summer solstice with bonfires and firecrackers.

In the last years we have a dilemma with this tradition for the very high number of fires in the woods, it is a real madness.

In the last few years, we have had a dilemma with this tradition forbecause of the very high number of fires in the woods, i. It is a real madness.

"In the last years" isn't exactly wrong, but "in the last few years" sounds more natural. Also, "It is reallly crazy" is a more colloquial and more commonly-used way to say "It is a real madness."
Grammar Stylistic

In the last years we haved a dilemma with this tradition forbecause of the very high number of fires in the woods, it iwas a real madness.

Last weekend there was more of thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

Grammar

Last weekend there wasere more ofthan thirty fires at the same time in Catalunya.

For this reason, many municipalities has banned the firecrackers, because is the cause of many fires.

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

You use "firecrackers" (a plural noun) before the comma, so you have to use "they" to refer to the plural firecrackers after the comma
Spelling Grammar

For this reason, many municipalities hasve banned the firecrackers, because isthey are the cause of many fires.

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleaning influence in these fires too.

The high temperatures and lack of forests cleanings influence in these fires too.

Grammar Usage

The high temperatures and lack ofinefficient forests cleaning influence in these fires too.

On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, and this night will be a real hell for them.

On the other hand, many animals are very sensitive to the strong noise of firecrackers, andso this night will be a real hell for them.

Usage

You need LangCorrect Premium to access this feature. Upgrade

About the author

D
Ducky

Languages

  • Catalan Spanish
  • English
Follow

Related journals