Dec. 31, 2020
Journal 31/12/20
Today is the last day of 2020. The weather is pretty good in my city: sunny, dry and warm. It seems like I have many feelings, but again, I can’t tell them exactly. I just feel the time is too fast, and I can’t stop it. Many things like this, we can’t keep it, just see it off. The only thing we can do is work hard, never waste time.
Journal 31/12/20
Today is the last day of 2020.
The weather is pretty good in my city: sunny, dry and warm.
I just feel ths like time ipasses too fastquickly, and I can’t stop it.
The only thing we can do is to work hard, and never waste time.
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Hi! It's my first time editing; I hope they are useful to you. I'm not sure what "many things like this, we can't keep it, just see it off" means, but good work otherwise! It's way above beginner level. Happy new year! :)
Dec. 31, 2020
"many things like this, we can't keep it, just see it off"
I mean that many things are like time: we can’t ask them to stay, for example, some people, some flowers, some nice things. They happened, but disappeared again. Face to this situation, we could do nothing but see them off.
Thank you for your corrections and they are very helpful.
Today is the last day of 2020.
The weather is pretty good in my city: sunny, dry and warm.
It seems like I have many feelings, but again, I can’t tell them exactly.really express them.
I just feel theat time isflies by too fast, and I can’t stop it.
Many things like this, we can’t keep it, just see it off.
Many things like what? your feelings? If so, what do you mean by you can't keep it?
The only thing we can do is to work hard, and to never waste time.
Dec. 31, 2020
Many things like this, we can’t keep it, just see it off.
Many things like what? your feelings? If so, what do you mean by you can't keep it?
Like time
Dec. 31, 2020
Okay, then you might want to say "many things in life, such as time, cannot be be controlled, therefore, why not live and let live? " This would be very natural and understandable to a native English speaker.
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Today is the last day of 2020. |
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The weather is pretty good in my city: sunny, dry and warm. |
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It seems like I have many feelings, but again, I can’t tell them exactly. It seems like I have many feelings, but |
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I just feel the time is too fast, and I can’t stop it. I I just feel th |
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Many things like this, we can’t keep it, just see it off. Many things like this, we can’t keep it, just see it off. Many things like what? your feelings? If so, what do you mean by you can't keep it?
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The only thing we can do is work hard, never waste time. The only thing we can do is to work hard The only thing we can do is to work hard |
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