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Jack

Nov. 24, 2020

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Journal 11/24/20

I once thought I was not so stupid, I could learn English well in a relatively short time. After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginning thought was totally wrong. To learn a foreign language well, you have to master a lot of skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing. And each skill would take at least one year in my opinion. Learning languages needs to be very patient and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire. Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it.

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I once thought I was not so stupid,. I thought I could learn English well in a relatively short time.

Joining with a comma does not work here. The proper join would be the semicolon ";" I think. Almost no one knows how to use a semicolon, including me. "I once thought I was not so stupid; I could learn English well in a relatively short time."

After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginningfirst thought was totally wrong.

To learn a foreign language well, you have to master a lot of skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing.

And each skill would take at least one year in my opinion.

Learning languagesYou needs to be very patient when learning languages and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire.

"Learning languages" is not something that can "be patient." People, even animals can be patient, but not ideas.

Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it.

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Jack

Nov. 24, 2020

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Thank you for your corrections bro; thank you very much.

Journal 11/24/20

I once thought I was not so stupid, I could learn English well in a relatively short time.

I once thought I was not so stupid,. I thought I could learn English well in a relatively short time.

After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginning thought was totally wrong.

After learning it for more than one year, I have to admit that my very beginningfirst thought was totally wrong.

To learn a foreign language well, you have to master a lot of skills: listening, speaking, reading and writing.

And each skill would take at least one year in my opinion.

Learning languages needs to be very patient and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire.

Learning languagesYou needs to be very patient when learning languages and you can’t be in a hurry, or it will backfire.

Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it.

Although I still want to master English as soon as possible, I have to be very patient with it.

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