His name is Bob and he has many superpowers like fire breathing, super strength, super speed, has the abilitiesy to fly and to do anything he thinks of.

When he was around 23 he joined United States Army s. Some time later, his duty is army and he has got a wife and two children.

Not sure what you're trying to say, but if you want to say he has a duty to be in the army then army can't act as the thing that he is being.

one day when he was someone out broke into his home and killed his family and then he seeked for revenge.

You need another subject because if you don't have one then you won't know who broke into his home.

Hello, my name is James and today I am gonnaing tell you about my favorite superhero.

His name is Bob h. He has many superpowers like fire breath, super strength, super speed, abilities to fly and to do anything he thinks of.

When he was around 23, he joined the United States Army s. Some time later, his duty is army and he has gotbecame being in the army while having a wife and two children.

oOne day, when he was out, someone broke into his home and killed his family and then he seeked for. He wanted revenge.

Hello m. My name is James, and today I am gonnaing to tell you about my favorite superhero.

His name is Bob and he has many superpowers like fire breathing fire, super strength, super speed, the abilitiesy to fly and to do anything he thinks of.