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bsteck

May 10, 2022

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It's worth it

Love.

What is love? I think we all asked our selfes already this question. And it's a good one. Love is a feeling and at the same time it's a choice, that has nothing to do with feelings. As children it's one of the most important things we need to become healthy grown ups, and we need it to show others, that we care about them. Love can be the most beautiful Thing in life, and at the same time the most scarry and challenging one.

Love is a feeling. Beeing in love for the first time is so exciting and beautiful. When you realise, that you just can't stop thinking about this one person, you want to spend time with this person until eternity and you can't imagine life without him or her.
And probably, after some years it will happen, that you suddenly stop having this feeling for this person. They even annoy you sometimes, you start argueing, and you would have never imagined that that's even possible. At this point love becomes a choice. You're got to choose the other person, even though you think you're right, even though you got hurt - If you really love them, you will choose them.
Also our parents chose to change our dipers and woke up in the middle of the night, when we were crying, because of a stupit nightmare. Writing about children, an important aspect is also that babies need love in order to become emotionally stable grown ups. They need love and affection, aß they need nurtrition and sleep. Without no affection at all, babies die. I would argue that also we, aß grown ups need love to survive - we won't die physically, but emotionally. Love can be scarry. By loving someone, by opening up to someone, letting to know someone about our deepest feelings and thoughts, we take the risk to be hurt. Thats Why some people rather choose to shut their heart of from others and letting No one inside. Thats probably the safest way, but a really lonely way. And by doing so these people also miss the most exciting and beautiful thing in life: Love and beeing loved, knowing someone and beeing know.
Love is scarry, exciting, adventoures, love can hurt.
But over all, and in the end, If you hold on and choose her, love is worth it.

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I think we allhave all already asked our selfves already this question.

Already modifies asked, so it should come before it.

And it's a good one.

This is okay stylistically, but typically, you do not begin sentences with conjunctions.

Love is a feeling, and at the same time it's a choice, that has nothing to do with feelings.

"That has nothing to do with feelings" is a dependent clause that describes "choice."

As children, it's one of the most important things we need to become healthy grown ups, and we need it to show others, that we care about them.

Love can be the most beautiful Thing in life, and at the same time the most scarry and challenging one.

This is a stylistic comma. It's not technically correct, but it's okay.

Beeing in love for the first time is so exciting and beautiful.

When you realise, that you just can't stop thinking about this one person, you want to spend time with this person until eternity and you can't imagine life without him or her.

This isn't a complete sentence, but it's rather poetic. ☺

And probably, after some years it will happen, that you: you will suddenly stop having this feeling for this person.

Make sure to keep tenses consistent.

They even annoy you sometimes, you start argueing, and you would have never imagined that that's even possible.

At this point love becomes a choice.

You'rve got to choose the other person, even though you think you're right, even though you got're hurt - If you really love them, you will choose them.

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I edited the first half, but I can see you put a lot of thought into this! Good writing.

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bsteck

May 16, 2022

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Thank you! :)

It's worth it

Love.

What is love?

I think we have all asked our selfves already this question before.

And it's a good one.

Love is a feeling and at the same time it's a choice, that has nothing to do with feelings.

As children it's one of the most important things we need to become healthy grown ups, and we need it to show others, that we care about them.

Love can be the most beautiful Tthing in life, and at the same time the most scarry and challenging one.

Love is a feeling.

Beeing in love for the first time is so exciting and beautiful.

When you realise, that you just can't stop thinking about this one person, you want to spend time with this person until eternity and you can't imagine life without him or her.

And probably, after some years, it willmay happen, that you suddenly stop having this feeling for this person.

They even annoy you sometimes, you start argueing, and you would have never imagined that that's even possible.

At this point love becomes a choice.

You're got to choose the other person, even though you think you're right, even though you got hurt - If you really love them, you will choose them.

Also our parents chose to change our diapers and wokegot up in the middle of the night, when we were crying, because of a stupitd nightmare.

Writing about children, it is also an important aspect is also that babies need love in order to become emotionally stable grown ups.

They need love and affection, just as they need nurtrition and sleep.

Without noany affection at all, babies die.

I would argue that also we, aß grown ups also need love to survive - we won't die physically, but emotionally.

Love can be scarry.

By loving someone, by opening up to someone, letting to know someone know about our deepest feelings and thoughts, we take the risk tof being hurt.

That's Wwhy some people rather choose to shut their heart off from others and not letting No anyone inside.

That's probably the safest way, but a really lonely way, too.

And by doing so these people also miss the most exciting and beautiful thing in life: Llove and beeing loved, knowing someone and beeing known.

Love is scarry, exciting, adventoures,ous; love can hurt.

But over all, and in the end, If you hold on and choose herit, love is worth it.

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Nicht schlecht. Unterscheidest du zwischen „Liebe" und „Verliebtsein"? :)

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bsteck

May 16, 2022

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Danke. Ja, genau :) .. das ist der springende Punkt eigentich.

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diggn

May 16, 2022

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Danke. Ja, genau :) .. das ist der springende Punkt eigentich.

In der Tat :)

It's worth it

Love.

What is love?

I think we all asked our selfes already this question.

I think we have all asked our selfves already this question before.

I think we allhave all already asked our selfves already this question.

And it's a good one.

And it's a good one.

Love is a feeling and at the same time it's a choice, that has nothing to do with feelings.

Love is a feeling and at the same time it's a choice, that has nothing to do with feelings.

Love is a feeling, and at the same time it's a choice, that has nothing to do with feelings.

As children it's one of the most important things we need to become healthy grown ups, and we need it to show others, that we care about them.

As children it's one of the most important things we need to become healthy grown ups, and we need it to show others, that we care about them.

As children, it's one of the most important things we need to become healthy grown ups, and we need it to show others, that we care about them.

Love can be the most beautiful Thing in life, and at the same time the most scarry and challenging one.

Love can be the most beautiful Tthing in life, and at the same time the most scarry and challenging one.

Love can be the most beautiful Thing in life, and at the same time the most scarry and challenging one.

Love is a feeling.

Beeing in love for the first time is so exciting and beautiful.

Beeing in love for the first time is so exciting and beautiful.

When you realise, that you just can't stop thinking about this one person, you want to spend time with this person until eternity and you can't imagine life without him or her.

When you realise, that you just can't stop thinking about this one person, you want to spend time with this person until eternity and you can't imagine life without him or her.

When you realise, that you just can't stop thinking about this one person, you want to spend time with this person until eternity and you can't imagine life without him or her.

And probably, after some years it will happen, that you suddenly stop having this feeling for this person.

And probably, after some years, it willmay happen, that you suddenly stop having this feeling for this person.

And probably, after some years it will happen, that you: you will suddenly stop having this feeling for this person.

They even annoy you sometimes, you start argueing, and you would have never imagined that that's even possible.

They even annoy you sometimes, you start argueing, and you would have never imagined that that's even possible.

At this point love becomes a choice.

You're got to choose the other person, even though you think you're right, even though you got hurt - If you really love them, you will choose them.

You'rve got to choose the other person, even though you think you're right, even though you got're hurt - If you really love them, you will choose them.

Also our parents chose to change our dipers and woke up in the middle of the night, when we were crying, because of a stupit nightmare.

Also our parents chose to change our diapers and wokegot up in the middle of the night, when we were crying, because of a stupitd nightmare.

Writing about children, an important aspect is also that babies need love in order to become emotionally stable grown ups.

Writing about children, it is also an important aspect is also that babies need love in order to become emotionally stable grown ups.

They need love and affection, aß they need nurtrition and sleep.

They need love and affection, just as they need nurtrition and sleep.

Without no affection at all, babies die.

Without noany affection at all, babies die.

I would argue that also we, aß grown ups need love to survive - we won't die physically, but emotionally.

I would argue that also we, aß grown ups also need love to survive - we won't die physically, but emotionally.

Love can be scarry.

Love can be scarry.

By loving someone, by opening up to someone, letting to know someone about our deepest feelings and thoughts, we take the risk to be hurt.

By loving someone, by opening up to someone, letting to know someone know about our deepest feelings and thoughts, we take the risk tof being hurt.

Thats Why some people rather choose to shut their heart of from others and letting No one inside.

That's Wwhy some people rather choose to shut their heart off from others and not letting No anyone inside.

Thats probably the safest way, but a really lonely way.

That's probably the safest way, but a really lonely way, too.

And by doing so these people also miss the most exciting and beautiful thing in life: Love and beeing loved, knowing someone and beeing know.

And by doing so these people also miss the most exciting and beautiful thing in life: Llove and beeing loved, knowing someone and beeing known.

Love is scarry, exciting, adventoures, love can hurt.

Love is scarry, exciting, adventoures,ous; love can hurt.

But over all, and in the end, If you hold on and choose her, love is worth it.

But over all, and in the end, If you hold on and choose herit, love is worth it.

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