Nov. 21, 2021
Dear John,
I am Li Ming, an over-sea student who is going to share the apartment with you. I am very exciting and I wish we can get along well next year. To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance.
First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late. I will try my best to keep my voice down for not to disturb your sleep. Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend. Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind. Last, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a rest.
I do hope we can meet soon. By the way, I have never been there before, could you give me some advice about living there?
Yours sincerely,
Li Ming
<p>Hey there,here is my composition practicing for a vital exam. Please correct it and give me some advice. Thanks!</p>
<p>Here are the directions:</p>
<p>Suppose you are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John, a local student. Write him an email to</p>
<p>1) tell him about your living habits, and</p>
<p>2) ask for advice about living there. </p>
Introduction letter
Dear John,
I am Li Ming, an over-sea student who is going to share the apartment with you.
I am Li Ming, an over-seas student who is going to share the apartment with you.
I am very excitinged to meet you, and I wishhope we can get along well next year.
To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance.
First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late.
I will try my best to keep my voice down foras not to disturb your sleep.
Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend.
wow, so early!
Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind.
I would not advise you to do this.
Lastly, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a resting.
I do hope we can meet soon.
By the way, I have never been thereo (place name) before, could you give me some advice about living there?
Yours sincerely,
Feedback
Lovely! If this is a real letter please don't make your housemates food unless you're good friends. Some people can take advantage of you and will abuse your kindness.
Introduction letter |
Dear John, |
I am Li Ming, an over-sea student who is going to share the apartment with you. I am Li Ming, an over |
I am very exciting and I wish we can get along well next year. I am very excit |
To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance. |
First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late. |
I will try my best to keep my voice down for not to disturb your sleep. I will try my best to keep my voice down |
Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend.
wow, so early!
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Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind. Maybe I can make you I would not advise you to do this.
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Last, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a rest. Lastly, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am |
I do hope we can meet soon. |
By the way, I have never been there before, could you give me some advice about living there? By the way, I have never been t |
Yours sincerely, |
Li Ming |
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