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yueyu1352

Nov 21

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Introduction letter

Dear John,
I am Li Ming, an over-sea student who is going to share the apartment with you. I am very exciting and I wish we can get along well next year. To avoid any unnecessary trouble, I would like to tell you about my living habits in advance.

First, I am used to studying at night so I might return home late. I will try my best to keep my voice down for not to disturb your sleep. Then, I always get up early at 6:30 a.m. even on the weekend. Maybe I can make your breakfast if you don't mind. Last, I am sensitive to noise so please don't be noisy when I am having a rest.

I do hope we can meet soon. By the way, I have never been there before, could you give me some advice about living there?

Yours sincerely,
Li Ming

Hey there,here is my composition practicing for a vital exam. Please correct it and give me some advice. Thanks!


Here are the directions:


Suppose you are going to study abroad and share an apartment with John, a local student. Write him an email to


1) tell him about your living habits, and


2) ask for advice about living there. 

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